A Flame Once Burned

The  flame that  once burned in that mortal shell
through life and love  that sparked many  emotions
  It was now  gone forever, its fire quelled

 It had burned  through many storms upon life's ocean
In tears and laughter,  it  would   continue to burn
Through life and love that sparked many  emotions

 When the flame dimmed and flickered, it  caused  some  concern
 would  it   blaze  back and  resume its dance?
In tears and laughter it  would continue  to burn

Time had stolen  much  of its radiance
 The time of its end  had finally  come
 would  it   blaze  back and resume its dance?

 But this once great flame  did finally succumb
 had flickered  awhile  before going out 
 The time of its end had finally  come

Of its end there was no doubt
The flame that once burned in that mortal shell
had flickered awhile  before going out
It was now  gone forever,  its fire quelled
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Posey Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 11:26 AM
I am forced to favor anyone who handles this form so well. .....reading your winning Terzanelle renders it easy to admire... Congrats on your win.....Jake
Anglesey Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 2:45 PM
I reaaly like this poetry form. You brought life to words. Well done and congrats on your win :)
Guzzi Avatar
July 29, 2013 at 6:35 PM
Congrad's on your fine verse winning! Light & Love
May Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 12:58 PM
thank you Debbie
Posey Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 3:58 PM
My friend, I am most impressed. Before today I would have thought terzanelle referred to some gypsy-like Italian dance. I must confess that after reading your work I have an almost irresistable urge to lay down my pen. Now I must say that to surpass your talent level is no longer a goal.... I can only hope to remain within your shadow. Terrific entry... Jake
Guzzi Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 3:34 PM
Congrad's on your win. Happy hoildays. Light & Love
A   Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 3:52 PM
Joseph, Congratulations with your awesome win in the "A Flame Once Burned " contest... always~PD
Arowolo Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 3:24 PM
Wonderful and excellent write,Joseph...lovely piece....Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest....
Roberts Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 11:28 AM
Congratulations Joseph....Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 10:38 AM
Big congratulations once again Joseph, awesome write xx
Liwayway Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 1:23 AM
superb write my friend Joseph. Good luck in the contest..thanks for dropping by on my poem...hugs :)
Palmer Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 12:30 PM
great write Joseph
Falotico Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 1:46 PM
Mr. May, I am a fan... love your way of writing... Michael
May Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 4:19 PM
thanks for those kind words Michael...
Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 12:07 PM
Great work..I am not familar with this form..I will have to look it up..Thanks for the congrats...Good luck in the contest of course you won't need luck with this one which is a sure winner..Sara
May Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 4:18 PM
thanks Sara ...,it is similar to villanelle
Dietrich Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 11:35 PM
Hi, again . I don't think there is a recent post of yours for me to see, but thanks for your comments to me today.
May Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 4:17 PM
thanks Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 2:48 PM
wow, how ambitious of you, doing it in such a difficult form. But you pulled it off and very well. Best of luck in the contest, my friend.
May Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 4:37 PM
thank you Andrea...I appreciate your comments
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