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Blowing in white noise Listen to the people speak A flag at half mast Blacks mine gold bars Blood diamonds stolen wealth Africa’s rebirth Blue skies green fields Much brighter days lay ahead On fertile grazing Thabang Jan Ngoma 07-17-2015 From South Africa Flag colours - black, gold, green, white, chilli red and blue. Sponsor: Judy Konos Contest Name: Your Country State City Flag

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Date: 8/9/2015 11:28:00 PM
Great to know about your national pride Thabang! Congrats on great win!
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Date: 8/9/2015 1:54:00 AM
Congratulations Thabang, love that 'blowing in white noise'. Great line. Well done. regards, Viv
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Date: 8/9/2015 12:57:00 AM
Congrats Thabang!! Beautiful :-) Love, Anu
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Date: 8/8/2015 10:48:00 PM
THABANG, Congratulations on your Flag win....... SKAT
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Date: 8/8/2015 8:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love Joyce
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Date: 8/8/2015 3:56:00 PM
This is such a great poem, Thabang...covering all the colors with meaning, and in such a short style. Well done!
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Date: 7/16/2015 6:25:00 PM
Such powerful images especially in the first 2 haiku - love the positivity in the final poem excellent pen - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/17/2015 9:30:00 AM
Hi Jan...thank u for the comment & well wishes...Our history is a painful past, but hey here we're(:heers, Tbang