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A Five Year Old

A Five Year Old A boy, age five once told me. I’m going to get me a “beaaar.” When I grow up... I will shoot him. Then, wear his head for a scare. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 18, 2010 Poetic form: Chastushka

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Date: 1/18/2010 11:38:00 PM
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Date: 1/18/2010 3:27:00 PM
the sort of thing a five-year-old would say. Nice rhyme. a form I will have to look up. :) ...Margaret
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Date: 1/18/2010 2:07:00 PM
This is cute...Letter posted,I'm Back.Please read.hope all is well with you.Thank you for all you have done to help me.I was listening.Take care.
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Date: 1/18/2010 1:25:00 PM
Nice!!! Keep your pen flowing....:JP]
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