A Five Year Old

A Five Year Old

A boy, age five once told me.
I’m going to get me a “beaaar.”
When I grow up... I will shoot him.
Then, wear his head for a scare. 

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
    January 18, 2010

Poetic form: Chastushka
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Scripca Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 11:38 PM
soup mail
Foster Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 3:27 PM
the sort of thing a five-year-old would say. Nice rhyme. a form I will have to look up. :) ...Margaret
Bono Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 2:07 PM
This is cute...Letter posted,I'm Back.Please read.hope all is well with you.Thank you for all you have done to help me.I was listening.Take care.
Pickett Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 1:25 PM
Nice!!! Keep your pen flowing....:JP]
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