Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Free verse

A First Stolen Date-W

It was a stolen date on a late winter evening
Placing rosy dots on her cheek with a hug
A secret told to the senses instead to ears
Then found the right place for the kisses,
Kisses stamped one after the other like tears.
The real ones that I could not hold them back.
There were brief, swift and before were done
The floodgates open for everything else
Starting with a comma then a question mark
Followed by an exclamation point learning
The basic spelling that all lovers should know.
I began the kiss and she begged more at the end.

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Third Place win in
Contest : My First date sponsored by Carol brown

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Robin Davis March 24, 2014 at 10:43 PM Dr. Ram Such a creative and fun write. Full of love, passion and sweetness. Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Blind Dates poem

Andrea Dietrich October 15, 2011 at 2:59 PM Seeing this one again. I really liked this one!

Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2011 at 8:23 AM Dr. Ram, it sounds like you were learning a lot more than the rules of punctuation on this first date. what a creative way to discuss the learning of kissing! Congrats.

Dalila Agtani July 16, 2011 at 12:22 AM Congratulations Dr Mehta! Dalila

Lee Ramage July 15, 2011 at 9:45 PM Congratulations on your win. Lee

Don Johnson July 15, 2011 at 6:05 PM The rosy dots? forget me nots, great verse without this question. Well done sir, on ya, Don

Black Eyed Susan July 15, 2011 at 4:10 PM Congratulations on your 3rd place win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 15, 2011 at 2:10 PM Congrats Dr. Ram on your terrific third place win in first date contest with this dynamite write luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown July 15, 2011 at 12:57 PM Congratulations on your placement in my contest and thank you for supporting my contest Dr. Ram. Love, Carol

Dinda Minardi July 7, 2011 at 9:01 AM Wonderful!!! This is really sweet and creative! :)

Black Eyed Susan July 7, 2011 at 7:49 AM Nicely done. i like the grammar words and how you used them to emphasize what was going on. very clever. good luck in the contest.

Cory Long July 7, 2011 at 5:07 AM nice job with this write full of emotion good luck in the contest. cory

Nette Onclaud July 7, 2011 at 4:23 AM oh, dr. ram, how romantic... well, i was sooo naive then! love your word scenes.. winning wishes with hugggs, nette

Kash Poet July 7, 2011 at 3:01 AM A romantic write here Dr Mehta....enjoyed very much...

Phyllis Babcock July 6, 2011 at 8:54 PM Enjoyed this sweet romantic write of your first date. Yes, it is a learning process in the art of dating. love phyl

Jeff Sampica July 6, 2011 at 6:52 PM A short tale that I enjoyed reading on my break. Loved it, especially the last two lines.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 6, 2011 at 5:43 PM delicate all through every line ..sweet and romantic Dr. Ram.. good luck in the contest my friend.. hope u had a wonderful holiday weekend on the 4th luv..

Don Johnson July 6, 2011 at 3:25 PM oh dear, I hear that you been bad, or only exclamations:) great verse i see, on ya, Don

Joe Maverick July 6, 2011 at 3:11 PM I am a little lost in this one Dr Ram, but have enjoyed reading your words..

Red Fiery July 6, 2011 at 2:49 PM love and tobacco...hand in hand...beautiful write Dr Mehta ! Passion provokes us a lot...this is what I feel while writing a poem... Michael Wayne July 10, 2011 at 7:57 AM tobacco?