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A First Love Gone Rogue

A first love gone rogue
A passion extinguished
A true heart crucified
Writhing and wrenching,
Under deception’s spikes
On infidelities twisted cross.
 
A secret kept, a truth untold
A new chapter unfolds
A young man’s search
For identities answer
Awakens a hurtful memory
Of a first love gone rogue

Will the destroyer of hearts
From one man’s distant past
Steal a victim from the present?
A simple test will put the question to rest
Will the truth sought be the one found?
Or will this be the lie most profound?

To love and to loath 
A first love gone rogue. 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/7/2013 10:40:00 AM
Hello, Kim, :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Nathan's contest!!! awesome winning write. LOVE LOVE * Linda
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Kim Morrison
Date: 7/7/2013 1:04:00 PM
Thank you! It was a shock to me! I like your avatar.
Date: 7/5/2013 12:35:00 PM
congrats Kim on your win love it Shadow x smiles
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Kim Morrison
Date: 7/5/2013 1:45:00 PM
Thank You!
Date: 7/3/2013 6:41:00 AM
Kim, congrats on the win. This is a perfect story of the loss of the most memorable experience we all have at least once. Great word choices :)
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Kim Morrison
Date: 7/3/2013 8:37:00 AM
Thank You Karen!
Date: 7/2/2013 10:26:00 AM
an excellent write friend Kim. congratulations on your win :) hugs Maria
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Kim Morrison
Date: 7/2/2013 9:06:00 PM
Thank You Maria!
Date: 7/2/2013 6:47:00 AM
Congratulations Kim on your fabulous win. A great write. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Kim Morrison
Date: 7/2/2013 7:25:00 AM
Thank You
Date: 7/2/2013 6:45:00 AM
I can see why this poem was chosen, it is very good.
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Date: 7/2/2013 7:25:00 AM
Thank You!
Date: 7/1/2013 9:45:00 PM
Kim, a great winning poem, in Nathan's (one of your best ) contest. :-) SKAT
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Kim Morrison
Date: 7/2/2013 7:26:00 AM
Thank You! I am surprised!
Date: 7/1/2013 9:22:00 PM
congrats ' NATE
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Date: 6/10/2013 9:28:00 AM
Kim, Congratulations with your nice winning poem ... xox~ LINDA
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Kim Morrison
Date: 6/10/2013 10:15:00 AM
Thank You! Linda
Date: 6/7/2013 10:53:00 AM
thank you for choosing my contest. Congrats! ~SKAT~
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Kim Morrison
Date: 6/7/2013 10:55:00 AM
Thank you SKAT!
Date: 4/16/2013 7:07:00 PM
What a neat investigation of the heart you have established with an awesome rhythm of words. Your words are deep and intriguing. Whoo! Found another incredibly awesome poet! Always, Laura
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Kim Morrison
Date: 6/7/2013 10:56:00 AM
Thank You!
Date: 4/16/2013 5:32:00 PM
Hello Kim, I had a relationship that went rogue. Maybe it was all good for the new chapters coming up. loving and loathing ..... what a mix!! great poem ~*~ SKAT
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Kim Morrison
Date: 6/7/2013 10:56:00 AM
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Date: 4/16/2013 2:26:00 AM
Masterful write. Welcome to the Soup. Namaste. Rick
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Date: 6/7/2013 10:56:00 AM
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Date: 4/14/2013 9:45:00 PM
This is deeply spoken...I enjoyed reading once again. Welcome to Poetry Soup!!! :)
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Kim Morrison
Date: 6/7/2013 10:56:00 AM
Thank You!