A First Line Prompt

Red Lanterns 

Outside the city where the pomegranates grow,
Red lanterns hang where green orchards glow.
They swing in the breeze, they dance and then freeze,
Red glistening balls say cheese, play yo yo and tease.

Outside the city where the pomegranates grow,
Red lanterns hang where green orchards glow.
The butterflies flutter in, the bees swarm in,
Their honey they churn in, their lips sugared in

Outside the city where the pomegranates grow,
Red lanterns hang where green orchards glow.
Arched rainbows above them, midnight stars cover them,
Spring season blossoms them, summers in hands toss them.

Outside the city where the pomegranates grow,
Red lanterns hang where green orchards glow.
Poets are inspired to verbalize, lovers flock to romanticize
Children fly through to chastize, their pets follow to energize, 

Outside the city where the pomegranates grow,
Red lanterns hang where green orchards glow.
Coronated princesses in dreams become temptresses,
Songbirds in high spiritedness transform it all into seductiveness.

Outside the city where the pomegranates grow,
Red lanterns hang where green orchards glow.


April 18, 2016
For Julia Ward
A First Line Prompt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Chansarkar Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 9:05 AM
Congratulations!What a treat1
Cheema Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 10:56 AM
Thanks Sara!
Daniel Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 3:20 AM
A big congratulations on your wonderful win:)
Cheema Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 4:13 AM
Thanks Jo!
Raina Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 3:19 PM
Congratulations on your win Balveen...
Cheema Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 2:49 AM
Thanks Meenakshi!
Misra Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:33 AM
Congrats, Balveen, on this superb win.
Cheema Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 2:49 AM
Thanks Karam!
Smith Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:14 AM
Congratulations Balveen, on your high placement in the contest...
Cheema Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 2:50 AM
Thanks Charlie!
Haight Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 10:58 AM
Amazing poem, Balveen! Congratulations on your well-deserved podium win! Hugs, Sandra
Cheema Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 2:50 AM
Thanks Sandra! I'm happy, too.
Ward Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 10:33 AM
Balveen - your poems keep winning in my contests. I love your style! Congratulations!
Ward Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 5:50 AM
That's a lovely reminder... :)
Cheema Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 2:56 AM
Julia, I'm glad you like them! It reminded me of a pomegranate tree I once had which was bountifully laden and forever glowing like red lanterns. Hugs, Balveen
Dalei Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 5:52 AM
Dear Balveen, Amazing imagery. Entire poem is enriched with brilliant & outstanding literature. My best wishes for the contest. Super 7 from me................with love
Cheema Avatar
April 22, 2016 at 11:37 AM
Thanks Manmath for your generous words!
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