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A First Line Prompt - Not For Contest

Outside the city where the pomegranates grow,
He feasted his eyes on her huge boobies on show
These were the fruits he most wanted to pluck
He was tempted but didn’t want to chance his luck
She looked him up and down and said ‘don’t even try’
Or I’ll punch you you moron right in the eye


5th April 2016

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2016

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Bl Devnath Date: 4/9/2016 5:04:00 PM A sweet naughty funny poem. Loved your style my lovely friend. Good luck. Loved always, bl Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/9/2016 5:11:00 PM Thanks BL:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray Date: 4/7/2016 7:31:00 AM I like your naughtiness Jan. I love this poem. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/7/2016 7:44:00 AM Me naughty - noooooooooooo lol:-) hugs Jan xx

White Sage Date: 4/6/2016 5:10:00 AM well, he must've gawked like a moron indeed, lol...the picture is amusing, nice write Jan Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/6/2016 5:11:00 AM LOL White sage:-) hugs Jan xx

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/6/2016 2:52:00 AM Excellent. Interesting write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/6/2016 4:52:00 AM Thanks Ravi:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/5/2016 11:40:00 PM GREAT picture with this funny poem, Jan. Go ahead and enter it. I dare you!!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/6/2016 4:51:00 AM No way LOL:-) hugs Jan xx

Walter T. Ashe Date: 4/5/2016 8:24:00 PM This is funny but she's very serious! :-) Visually humorous! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/5/2016 8:32:00 PM Thanks Walter:-) hugs Jan xx

Lewis Raynes Date: 4/5/2016 8:20:00 PM bahahaha nice. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/5/2016 8:30:00 PM Thanks Lewis:-) hugs Jan xx

Brian Davey Date: 4/5/2016 7:47:00 PM I think you and I had this talk before and I am glad you are still going out on a limb, I love it!!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/5/2016 8:19:00 PM LOL - I would never enter the contest but it doesn't stop me having a little fun lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance Date: 4/5/2016 7:45:00 PM HAHAHA funny!!!! :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/5/2016 8:18:00 PM Cheers Cas:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith Date: 4/5/2016 7:14:00 PM lol Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/5/2016 7:18:00 PM :-) thanks for dropping by:-) hugs jan xx

Timothy Hicks Date: 4/5/2016 6:49:00 PM ... just a peek? ;) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/5/2016 6:50:00 PM ha ha ha:-) Ok but no squashing her melons now Timothy:-) hugs Jan xx