A fire without falmes

Should I smile, should I cry
I really need to be their ally
What would they like the most
How to get in and be in the "bros"

I am scared they might get upset
What if they didn't like a word I said
Would they approve off this hair and clothes 
Or am I about to become a laughing stock

Though I came to the kitchen first 
But they want to be the first to quench their thirst
So I will stand by the counter in silence and wait 
For all I want is to be at peace and avoid debate 

I wish to stop acting dumb and bound
To be the one with a view and mind
To break the shackles of people's assent 
But the mind is too in swamp to get out

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Date: 1/20/2024 8:19:00 AM
Always be the independent one or the black sheep but in a good way. Your lines make me think of a person afraid to speak out. Well described
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Date: 1/17/2024 2:34:00 PM
Sounds like going to a fraternity open house on a college campus. If they can't look around and see who is there and try to make you comfortable, it may be the wrong fishing hole. It's a pretty tough situation but could be worse if you were married to it!
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Date: 1/15/2024 4:18:00 PM
Thats the quagmire right there Paghunda..' And so many seem In it.!
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Date: 1/15/2024 4:17:00 PM
Thats the quagmire right there Paghunda..' And so many seem In it.!
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Date: 1/14/2024 4:40:00 PM
Meek doesn't equate to weak. Time to step up, my friend
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Date: 1/14/2024 11:09:00 AM
Your poem beautifully captures the internal struggle of the speaker as they navigate the complexities of social interaction and the desire for acceptance. The choice between smiling and crying reflects the emotional turmoil of wanting to be an ally to others while grappling with the fear of potential disapproval.. Nicely done..
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 1/15/2024 10:21:00 AM
Hey SO, I'm humbled and delighted by your heartwarming feedback. I really appreciate your visit, and your thoughts I hold in high esteem! Thanks a lot
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