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A Fire Under Me Bum

All you friendlies here on the site A fire under me bum you always ignite Can't wait to arise To converse with you guys It's a pleasure, a thrill, a tremendous delight © Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/1/2015 5:45:00 AM

Nicely done, Jack! I sometimes share both your serious and silly verses with my mom. She really loves to hear them read out! Sorry I haven't been commenting as often. Though I've been stoppin by here each time I log in, as promised :) Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/1/2015 7:23:00 AM

I'm going to scold you, my dearest friend! You NEVER need to apologize! That is so sweet that you share my sillies with your mom! I am honoured dear Laura! You warm my heart! Till next time... love, Jack xxx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 4/30/2015 8:52:00 PM

G'day Jack... they broke the mould after making you young Jack. Lindsay

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/30/2015 8:56:00 PM

LOL Big chuckle here! Youse guys are much too kind!!! Sincerely, Lindsay, I really appreciate your very kind words! Cheers, Jack

Skat A

Date: 4/30/2015 7:25:00 PM

LOL, Jack, haven't read you in a long while. Glad you enjoy the passion, your friends on this site bring... SKAT

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/30/2015 7:55:00 PM

Thank you dear friend! Your recent visits have made me smile!!! Love and hugs, Jack xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 4/30/2015 1:45:00 PM

am happy to read you Jacko...it's either that or it means my work night is over...lol....You really brighten our days

Tim Smith
Date: 4/30/2015 2:13:00 PM

sure...I'll send you a nice Chicago style pizza : )

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/30/2015 2:03:00 PM

Don't you think you should share some of your pay check with jolly old Jack??? After all I'm there with you so I think I'm entitled to a cut!!!

Carol Eastman

Date: 4/30/2015 11:11:00 AM

Dragon and Grandpa Troll can't wait to get to your goodies on PoetrySoup every day... Tho when I read to them... I some times have to filter the wilder stuff... Bad boy! LOL

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/30/2015 11:19:00 AM

So am I to believe you censor me??? LOL xxx

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/30/2015 10:00:00 AM

Aww...you sweet old coot...haha! You sure know how to get on the good side of everyone...HUgs! :)

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/30/2015 10:14:00 AM

You say the nicest thing, dear Kimmie!!! This old coot, loves the ladies!!! Oh yah! Huggsies, Jacko xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/30/2015 8:00:00 AM

- Always "easy on the tongue" your funny limerick, Jack :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/30/2015 8:10:00 AM

My dearest Anne Lise, you make me smile... thank you my friend! Have a great day... love and hugs, Jack xxx

John Williams

Date: 4/30/2015 7:36:00 AM

A beaut poem Jack---one of you best. It's a bit like you Jack,really smooth.....kind regards----John

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/30/2015 7:42:00 AM

S-M-O-O-T-H... that's me! LOL! Have a good one my friend! Jack