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A Fire In My Soul

A fire in my soul is still burning brightly After all these years the fire rages nightly My dreams are filled Also thoughts unfulfilled Such is how life goes at times unsightly

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Valsa George

Date: 11/8/2021 9:27:00 PM

Indeed a limerick with serious insights....

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/9/2021 3:52:00 AM

Much appreciated dear friend!!! XOX

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/27/2021 4:15:00 PM

Hello Happy Jack, burn your fire brightly. Let it be seen. Love, Darlene.xxx-ooo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/28/2021 11:12:00 AM

Hello Happy Jack, you are welcome. Love, Darlene xxx-ooo.

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/27/2021 6:22:00 PM

Nice sentiment dear Darlene! XOX

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/27/2021 8:35:00 AM

Hope your fire burns for many years to come. Tom

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/27/2021 9:27:00 AM

Ouch! Got too close! Thanks my good friend! Cheers!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/27/2021 8:27:00 AM

Ah, there is so much truth in these lines, Jack. And the older I get, the more I realize those truths. Well done!

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/27/2021 9:39:00 AM

We can still be young at heart! Right on Milton! Thanks my friend!