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a fine pair

under a sullen moon
silence hovered
my mind meandered
the two soon
inextricably
entwined


AP: Honorable Mention 2025
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Wolf Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 7:35 PM
I like this merging, Line. Very fine!
Gauthier Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 11:19 AM
thank you so much, Gershon ~
George Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 10:19 PM
One can make out from the behavior and appearance, who are inextricably aligned. Well written, dear poet !
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 7:48 AM
yes, true ~ thanks, Valsa
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