A Fine Lady

A Fine Lady

There is something I want to tell you
about a Lady I once knew. She was a 
very tiny woman, with a heart as big
as TEXAS.

God gave her a soul and also a heart of 
gold. He send her here to do a job for Him,
She never once complained. Juanita was 
her name.

She was a hard working Lady. No job was
 too much, or too big for her. she could cook  
and she could sew. She held a job outside
her home. I can say - she worked her fingers
to the bone.

Sometimes she would sit quiet, without saying
a word. Maybe she was thinking if she had done
it all. She was there for everybody, especially if
they were sick. She would be the first to go and
take them a homemade dish.

I am not talking about my Mother. My Mother gave
me away. I don't condemmed her either. My father
had left her too. With little ones to raise - she didn't
know what to do.

This little fine Lady took my pain away. She gave me 
a home and a place to stay. She also gave me her 
love. I can now say - she made my day. Because of 
this fine Lady, I became what I am today.

I learned to call her Mother - she had sure earned 
that name. One day she left this Earth, because God 
had called her home. Her Job here had been done.

I don't worry about her. I know that she is in heaven.
Heaven is where Angels go. She was one fine Lady
and an Angel sent from heaven to teach me how 
to grow...

Copyright  2006
 by Lucilla M. Carrillo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Duggan Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 7:57 PM
Lucilla what an amazing tribute to the woman who raised you and yes she certainly deserves to be called mother, you were one lucky girl, I am sure she is looking down on you and guiding you, you have written some amazing writes, I will eventually go through them all, take care my dear friend.............Vera..........
Carrillo Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 2:48 PM
Vera; I'm glad that you read this poem. For a few years life was good, than it changed. No one has a perfect life.
Thomas Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 11:45 AM
Wow Lucilla! ...relate to my poem you did... I wasn't alone which is sometimes how I feel. This poem was a GREAT read.
Kendrick Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 2:00 PM
Great to read of such a fine lady..I know that you are proud to be called her daughter..Some women just do and do and I don't know where the energy comes to do all that they handle in a day..Thanks for the visits to my work.Your comments are always so uplifting..Sara
Ball Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 2:47 PM
What a fine tribute to your mom, Lucilla. It doesn't take anything special to produce a baby. It takes someone very special to be a MOM. That's what she was, she was your MOM. I love this, and she would too. God Bless and Happy Easter my friend. JB
Wesley Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 10:23 AM
What a wonderful story! Sometimes the most terrible situations have a miracle ending; so glad it happened to you Lucilla!
Johnson Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 10:45 PM
Very lovely tribute to your mother. Love, J
Brown Avatar
March 30, 2012 at 4:52 AM
Where did this week go I wonder again. But hey I have enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Lucilla. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with joy and happiness. Keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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