Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- a Fight Against Unknown Dangers -

Abandoned in the desert by robbers
Bruised and bleeding
Tied on hands and feet
It was dark, cold and I was shaking
The dawn of tomorrow
will it rise?
Please tell me
A bad dream,
close-up of red eyes
Like a snake moving without limbs
I followed a path, 
but suddenly it disappeared
and I lost my sense of direction

An ancient dry wind
with sand that grinds skin
Almost naked and sunburnt
Be embraced with temptation
So incredibly thirsty
The lips are wounded
and cracked
Clean water drops
would have been conditioner
for a dry throat
The moon is fading,
the darkness of nights malignant
A struggle to survive





27/10/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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*   - It was no dream ... the victim was supposed to die
     ... but "I" ... or SHE survived ... this is from a true story

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Eileen Manassian October 29, 2019 at 1:13 AM Oh, dear....what a horrific experience to have gone through. I'm glad she lived to tell the tale. I felt the desperation in every line, dear. Great write. Anne-Lise Andresen October 29, 2019 at 4:25 AM - Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green October 28, 2019 at 8:36 AM A sad and horrific poetic tale my friend. There is so much evil in this world that it is hard to fathom. What possesses someone to do despicable things like this to another human being. I will never understand. Well expressed Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2019 at 9:08 AM - I can't understand either, Chris  ... it's just cruel and vicious - Many thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit October 28, 2019 at 5:48 AM A story well told, Anne-Lise..a miracle that anyone would survive such conditions..but miracles do happen as you eloquently depicted. Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2019 at 5:54 AM - A terrible experience, Vijay ... I'm sure it has left deep marks - Many thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison October 28, 2019 at 3:19 AM Such vivid imagery . I'm so glad they survived Anne-Lise , miracles do happen.Hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2019 at 5:09 AM - Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham October 27, 2019 at 11:11 PM Thankfully the victim survived Anne, so much evil in our world. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2019 at 5:08 AM - Violence against innocent people ... - Unacceptable, Tom - Many thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh October 27, 2019 at 10:30 PM I'm glad you or she survived. This is a amazing poem. God bless you always, sweet lady, Gina Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2019 at 5:04 AM - Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Regina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May October 27, 2019 at 8:08 PM Glad the person survived this ordeal Anne...best wishes Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2019 at 5:04 AM - Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams October 27, 2019 at 7:12 PM wow...powerful poem...a nightmare to say the least,there is so much ugly in the world.... thankfully she survived....hugs Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2019 at 5:03 AM - She survived ... dehydrated, a broken nose and low body temperature - Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball October 27, 2019 at 5:19 PM My Gosh. I sure hope that wasn't you my friend. HOPE you OR she is okay today with no lasting scars emotionally or otherwise. A great write here and actually a great opener for a short story about a girl who went in search of her attackers and exacted her own brand of vigilante revenge. Praise God for His mercy. God Bless, JB Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2019 at 4:59 AM - No, Judy it wasn't me - But there are robbers even in 2019 ... a terrible experience ... yes, a nightmare in the waking state - Many thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper October 27, 2019 at 3:06 PM Wow, one to be a dream , but to be real is frightening even worse and yes miracles do happen I've seen a few God has blessed me with. Hugs dear friend Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2019 at 4:51 AM - She was found and it was a miracle, Eve :) - Many thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath October 27, 2019 at 2:10 PM A fear of bad dream, I feel here. Beautifully pictured. Loved always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2019 at 2:19 PM - No dream ... not a nightmare, my friend Bl - It's taken from a true story - Many thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One October 27, 2019 at 1:40 PM Sounds horrific...I don't think someone will last vRey long. Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2019 at 1:49 PM - Miracles can happen, my friend :) - Many thanks for visiting   and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)