A Field of Daisies

Emotion's color
pure innocent petals
blushing up at love 
smiling laughter on the wind
A happy field of daisies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Wanter Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 6:31 PM
Daisies are my favorite, and this little poem makes me happy!
Udaeta Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 8:22 PM
Mine too!
Callus Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 4:57 PM
You paint a most lovely image, Melani. I'd love to walk in your field of daisies. Regards // paul
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 8:31 AM
My favorite flower! Congrats to you, Melani!! Hugs, Rhonda
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 7:40 PM
I love daisies. Congratulations on your win Melanie.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 7:39 PM
I love daisies. Congratulations on your win Melanie.
Allison Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 2:21 PM
such beautiful imagery a lovely tanka:-) Hugs jan xx
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 12:06 PM
Very beautiful tanka, Melani. My favorite line is the last one. a 7 From me! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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