A Few Slices of Bangladesh

A little brown river, 
Naked children splashing in its muddy waters,
Their mirth and laughter of raucous delight,
Untroubled by foresight.

A tiny hut made of mud,
Parching in the dazzles of the ruthless sun,
The bent figure of a farmer as he nurtures
The field of paddy that his simple heart treasures. 

A bustling bazaar,
With its overwhelming array of sights and smells,
A man with a cart full of ripe plump litchis, a rickshaw puller,
Whiling away the time, adding to the cacophony as they bicker.

As the sun sets over the distant ragged hills and lush overgrowth,
I ponder on what I have retained
From the journey across the plains of my mother land,
Bangladesh, where happiness and poverty, go hand in hand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 30, 2009 at 6:51 PM
Sayeeka, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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September 25, 2009 at 4:22 PM
Dropping by to add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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September 25, 2009 at 10:23 AM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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September 24, 2009 at 10:32 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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June 28, 2009 at 4:52 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured
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June 25, 2009 at 10:48 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week. May you have many more Sayeeka. Love, Carol
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June 25, 2009 at 9:42 AM
You paint quite a picture. Congrats on the featured write. Vince
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June 21, 2009 at 6:22 PM
Thank you for giving us a glimpse of another part of the world. Your last line says so much about life. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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May 31, 2009 at 7:21 AM
great poem!
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May 31, 2009 at 3:23 AM
happiness and poverty goes hand in hand--so true,the most poor are the most rich in their hearts--beautiful--charma
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May 30, 2009 at 3:47 PM
You have painted it so beautifully here Sayeeka, it such a shame that your country has severe floods in the rainy season. It would be great to eradicate them for a while to get walls built to protect your lands, James
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