Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Other

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- a Festive Day -

Your best day
                                         life is short
                                        live with joy

                                        The path you
                                         chose to go
                                        at first dawn

                                        Who has said
                                      your foot tracks
                                         is just dust ?





23.01.2023
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Tricube Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Sara Kendrick

Tricube poem: 3 x 3 x 3 - 3 syllables per line - 3 stanzas

10th place in the contest

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Kathy Bahr January 31, 2023 at 7:29 AM Thank you for coming by. Quite a pic you have there great poem.

Janice Canerdy January 31, 2023 at 7:28 AM Love it, Anne-Lise! Janice

Sotto Poet January 31, 2023 at 7:02 AM Back with congratulations on your contest win, Anne-Lise. Blessings my friend.

Sara Kendrick January 30, 2023 at 5:00 AM Those red hat society ladies are enjoying themselves. Thank you for your participation in my contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. Very creative way to go. Sara

Christuraj Alex January 29, 2023 at 9:27 PM Thought-provoking question. Beautiful. Congratulations! Anne-Lise Andresen January 31, 2023 at 7:41 AM - Many thanks for your comment and congratulations, Alex :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin January 29, 2023 at 3:45 PM Anne-Lise, well done, love the last stanza, congratulations on your winning placement! Anne-Lise Andresen January 31, 2023 at 7:41 AM - Many thanks for your comment and congratulations, Tania :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler January 29, 2023 at 9:33 AM Back with big congratulations on your win Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen January 31, 2023 at 7:40 AM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Linda :) - hugs

Phyllis Babcock January 26, 2023 at 7:22 PM We make the best of each day as when we get to this age we realize how short time is. Nicely one. love phyl

Paul Callus January 24, 2023 at 2:20 PM Each day could be a bright one if we awake with the right attitude, Anne-Lise! I often used to meet an old friend of mine and ask "How are you today?" He'd answer: "I am out; I see the sky and the sun; I live another day" He was always happy. ~ Regards & Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen January 31, 2023 at 7:39 AM - Always grateful, friend Paul :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Joseph May January 24, 2023 at 8:46 AM We should enjoy each day. Very nicely penned Anne, hugs Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2023 at 8:57 AM - very true, my friend :) - thank you for reading :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit January 24, 2023 at 6:13 AM I see them making the best of time left. Well done in this new form, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2023 at 6:43 AM :))) ... yes they do ... why not :))) - Thanks, Vijay :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar January 24, 2023 at 2:46 AM Beautiful new form poem. Best for a win. Hugs. Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2023 at 2:50 AM - Fun to try something new ... thanks a lot, Victor :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes January 23, 2023 at 10:11 PM You are right, its all in the path you choose to go at first dawn. Dread the day, it may turn out dreadful. Plan a good day, you are off to a good start to make it a wonderful day. Thank you Anne -Lise. A wonderful message Anne-Lise Andresen January 31, 2023 at 7:38 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Wendy :) - hugs

Michelle Faulkner January 23, 2023 at 7:36 PM Lovely message, live life for today! Anne-Lise Andresen January 31, 2023 at 7:38 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Michelle :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich January 23, 2023 at 2:28 PM This is enchanting, Sunshine! Anne-Lise Andresen January 31, 2023 at 7:37 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Andrea :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler January 23, 2023 at 2:24 PM Wonderful Anne-Lise - Much more poignant than mine! GL dear AL! Linda Anne-Lise Andresen January 31, 2023 at 7:37 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Linda :) - hugs

Sotto Poet January 23, 2023 at 2:23 PM Nicely done, perfect for the contest, it's a winner for me. Regards and hugs Anne-Lise Andresen January 31, 2023 at 7:37 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Las :) - hugs

Regina Mcintosh January 23, 2023 at 1:23 PM Love it sweet lady. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina Anne-Lise Andresen January 31, 2023 at 7:36 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Gina :) - hugs