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A Feral Mind

A Feral Mind He had never cared for the herd instinct drifting toward the forewarned edges gazing into the eyes of freedom. Gnawing on the gnarled tufts of generations following the same rutted paths shunned by those who thought him “troubled”. He loathed the domestication of the herd its mindless mindfulness of rhetoric’s creed “the herd is more important than your need”. He asked the wise old owl: “WHY?” The owl answered only: “WHO?” His mind, gone feral, knew he knew. ©7/30/2018 for the Feral Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/31/2018 2:00:00 PM
I think at some point we all hear the "call of the wild". Some seek it, others shun it. Great write, John. I really like this one:)
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John Lawless
Date: 8/1/2018 3:31:00 PM
Yeah, Daniel, I've been following that call through the canyons of my mind for decades....Thanks for stopping by...
Date: 7/31/2018 1:52:00 PM
I was instantly captivated by this, and the last line brought it all together with an "end of the symphony and we all knew it" kind of feeling.
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John Lawless
Date: 8/1/2018 3:30:00 PM
...and the "very large lady with the really good voice" sang. Thanks for stopping to read and comment Caren

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