Jennifer Proxenos Poet Pantoum

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A Fearsome Nominee

A FEARSOME NOMINEE

If you could only see this breath taking panoramic view from the sky,
Soaring with me in thermals, my eagle eye searching below to dine,
You could tag me whilst flying through contours of clouds up high, 
And we’d dive down together to mother earth, spotting a meal fine!

Soaring with me in thermals, my eagle eye searching below to dine,
Let chaos rule beneath, my heart has been bathed in a soothing balm,
And we’d dive down together to mother earth, spotting a meal fine!
Today the Eagle took his mate, 'Take care my beauty' says he 'be calm'.

Let chaos rule beneath, my heart has been bathed in a soothing balm,
For all the animals on earth and birds of the air, have done no wrong!
Today the Eagle took his mate, 'Take care my beauty' says he 'be calm'.
I, His majesty of the skies, fearsome, will stop chaos and lead the strong.

For all the animals on earth and birds of the air, have done no wrong!
You could tag me whilst flying through contours of clouds up high, 
I, His majesty of the skies, fearsome, will stop chaos and lead the strong.
If you could only see this breath taking panoramic view from the sky.


                  Pantoum Rhyme  -  Personification Poetry Contest
                                      Sponsored by Eve Roper
                                              22/04/2020

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Joseph May November 8, 2020 at 6:04 PM Beautiful Pantoum Jennifer, best wishes..

Anil Deo April 30, 2020 at 1:07 PM Your eagle soars with power, wisdom, coexistence. I tried a pantoum, but settled for a COUPLET, yesterday. Your FORM did inspire me. Shalom /Peace/IRENE! Jennifer Proxenos May 1, 2020 at 2:59 AM Anil, my new and dear friend, yes Shalom, Peace, Irene for certain, our world has been turned upside down, only the eagle in the skies is wise and rules from the Heavens, guided by His Maker. Blessings, Jennifer.

Lindsay Laurie April 29, 2020 at 12:24 AM Hello Jennifer … the eagle is truly the ruler of the skies and determines that only the strong survive in the kingdom below. I enjoyed the way you formed this poem Jennifer - thank you - Lindsay Jennifer Proxenos May 1, 2020 at 2:50 AM Thank-you Lindsay, I enjoyed writing it first attempt but as the Beatles say 'With a little help from my friends'. Thank you for a lovely comment. take care and be safe. Blessings, Jennifer.

Paghunda Zahid April 26, 2020 at 1:20 PM Come on Jennifer this is far better that poem of mine on which you just commented. It truly is a beautifully crafted poem. Stay blessed! Jennifer Proxenos April 27, 2020 at 6:50 AM Yours was good and you touched on on or two of my thoughts. Thank you for a lovely comment Paghunda. Blessings an safe thoughts coming your way. Jennifer

Charlie Smith April 25, 2020 at 11:50 AM Fine use of form Jennifer, very well done... Jennifer Proxenos April 26, 2020 at 4:42 AM Thank-you Charlie so glad you enjoyed my poem, means a lot coming from you. Blessings and hugs my friend, Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu April 23, 2020 at 1:38 PM Hello Jennifer, I have read this poem several times, I am wondering is this bird an owl? or another breed of bird? Owls do hunt at night. I have seen an eagle hunt during the day. Be safe. Enjoy your day my friend. Jennifer Proxenos April 26, 2020 at 4:40 AM Eagles are fearsome hunters and their wing span can be huge. I want to thank you for being such a great and supportive friend - i both love and respect you. Keep well and safe Darlene. Jennifer.

Janice Canerdy April 23, 2020 at 8:36 AM Magnificent, vividly descriptive, Jennifer. Let's fly! Janice Jennifer Proxenos April 26, 2020 at 4:38 AM Hi Janice,I have read quite a few of your poems of late and love them. Thank you for an awesome comment my friend - yes lets fly, its safer up there! Blessings and hugs Jennifer.

Jenish Somadas April 23, 2020 at 1:41 AM Wonderful personification and Pantoum.. The lines are beautifully crafted.. Great write.. Good luck Jennifer.. Jennifer Proxenos April 26, 2020 at 4:31 AM Thank you Jenish, i really like your comment, thank-you. Thanks also for you wishes and good luck. Stay safe and take care. Jennifer.

Winged Warrior April 22, 2020 at 3:36 PM The Jennster strikes again...great poetry my friend...we must have more like this...stay safe and best wishes, plus hugs...^WW^ :o) Jennifer Proxenos April 26, 2020 at 4:28 AM Hi my dear friend ^WW^ - I do love your comment and think its about time to enter the realms of the skis again, sure it will be safer than planet Earth right now, blessings and hugs and stay safe. Jennster,

Judy Ball April 22, 2020 at 3:24 PM Oh well done Jennifer. Loved it and the pic. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB Jennifer Proxenos April 26, 2020 at 4:24 AM Thank-you Judy - the pic was one of three that we had to pick for the contest - the Eagle stared at me with a challenging look, so I chose him! Thank you for you good wishes. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Silent One April 22, 2020 at 2:21 PM A personified pantoum, this is very clever and you did it very well. I think Eve will like this one Jennifer Proxenos April 26, 2020 at 4:21 AM Thank-you Silent one, for everything including your loyal and respected support. A lovely comment and so happy you like it. Blessings, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 22, 2020 at 2:01 PM - We see 3 eagles fly by our new house ... and some black hawk ... a fantastic sight ... but, I'm a little scared they'll take my little dogs for dinner - A beautiful poem, dear Jenny :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jennifer Proxenos April 26, 2020 at 4:18 AM thank-you my dear friend, you new house sounds like paradise - thank you for a beautiful comment from a beautiful friend, you truly are my soul sister. Hugs, love, blessings and keep safe. Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf April 22, 2020 at 12:03 PM One doesn't need an 'eagle eye' to see that this pantoum soars majestically. Where eagles dare!! Great one, Jennifer! :) gw Jennifer Proxenos April 26, 2020 at 4:10 AM Oh what a majestic comment my dear friend - thank-you for an awesome, comment, one of my very best I have received. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer

Besma Riabi Dziri April 22, 2020 at 11:46 AM You are rising high with your impressive poetry taking with you your avid reader to the mystery of space, to the power of the eagle.. Your very words are wings to higher dimensions of an alluring beauty, depth of sight, strength of spirit and entrancement of the soul! A challenging entry! Dear Jenny, you just amaze with your soaring imagination! An immense pleasure to read your stunning poetry! Warmest wishes. Love and hugs. Jennifer Proxenos April 26, 2020 at 4:05 AM Hi Besma, my dear dear friend and soul sister, your comment surpasses my poem in eloquence and beauty - thank-you always for your sincere and genuine friendship. Have you ever thought of writing a book, it would do exceptionally well whatever you chose to write about and after having given your family and close friends copies, perhaps you could send me a signed copy from my famous author friend which I would treasure. Keep well and safe Besma, my thoughts are with you. love and hugs, Jennifer

Jan Allison April 22, 2020 at 11:13 AM Bravo Jennifer you nailed it with a beautiful poem!!!:-) hugs jan xx Jennifer Proxenos April 22, 2020 at 11:24 AM Jan you are a sweetheart, you deserve to win every contest you enter, but in any case, all are worth a win , you are special. Blessings, Jennifer.