A Father Is - For Contest

A father is….						
….that grouchy, cursing guy
who just banged his head
on the cabinet door
getting under the sink
to fix a leak

…that “voice” resounding
off the walls
singing – off key,
talking to the dog,
whispering
“I love you’s”
to sleeping children.

…that firm hand
patting you on the back
when deserved,
a bit lower at times
also when deserved.

…he is that “look”
that can inflate,
or deflate, you
amuse and confuse you,
stop you
in your tracks
to ponder – “why”

…he is the ears
that don’t seem
to be listening,
yet hear everything

…the eyes
that don’t seem
to be looking
but see “you”
when you can’t
see yourself

A father is
“that wry smile”
that grin
that says “I love you”
without words.

5/19/2016

submitted to – A Father is…- Poetry Contest
sponsor – Brenda Chiri-Carroll
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kimathi Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 7:01 AM
Greetings John. Congrats for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)
Lawless Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 11:29 AM
Thanks Teddy
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 29, 2016 at 4:40 PM
Oh John, this magnificent poem brought tears to my eyes. It is so brilliantly written I would have it at the top with Joyce's. It is going straight into my faves! I don't think you could have written it better! Congratulations on your most deserving win! #7 + ; )
Lawless Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 11:27 AM
Thank you Connie....a fav and a 7+. All for just being there whenever they whispered or cried DAD!!
Rebstock Avatar
May 29, 2016 at 11:58 AM
A favorite for me. Loved it
Lawless Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 11:25 AM
Thank you Shirley for stopping by to read and comment
Roper Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 10:33 PM
I see what kind of a father you are :-) great write congratulations on your win!
Lawless Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 11:25 AM
Eve, my son recently asked me to be the best man at his wedding. I asked him "why me?" and he replied "because you're the best man I know." I guess I got some of it right
Johnson Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 7:24 PM
A great poem. I like your father if this is his description Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Lawless Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 11:22 AM
Joyce, I think this is more of a hope that this is the way my children see me. Thanks for stopping by to read and comment.
A   Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 2:35 PM
John, amazing and beautiful... Congratulations. Linda
Lawless Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 11:20 AM
Thanks PD always nice to hear from you
Haight Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 10:15 AM
Such wonderful 'snapshot' images of the life of a devoted father, John. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
Lawless Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 11:19 AM
well, Sandra, at times the children weren't sure if I was "devoted or deranged". Thanks for your support
Chansarkar Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 12:12 PM
You've captured all there is to a father her,lovely John!
Lawless Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 11:16 AM
Yes, Sara, and I'm perfecting it in being a grandfather...x3
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