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A Father Figure

(fact) A father figure you trying to be. Are you crazy, are you stupid Jacque Andre is my father's name, why would you want to be him. For his one of a kind mentally crazy. your freakage life style doesn't run in my family Not by the second,nor by the minute. Who in the world would be attracted to they own family. It's disgusting and gross, I think I will vomit. Loving your family is one thing. But to pass beyond that boundaries is sicking as can be. That type of love is not a love a parent can forfil. So to try to be a father figure from being just a men. I think you have a problem and it's not me.

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Date: 1/2/2018 10:59:00 AM
That is a powerful poem you have that speaks to people. It has a message that too much love could be sickening. It is a good poem, but I think I spot a typo: "for fill".
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Nagella Jean-Baptiste
Date: 1/2/2018 8:53:00 PM
Thanks for noticing. I did not realize it. I was so in to what I was writing.i fixed it. This poem was base from experience just like all my personal poems.:-

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