A Farewell To Lovely

the light that shines from poetic lines
allows me to labor incessantly through this sojourn

please know that I shall not vanquish 
the voices in my head 
though the virtuoso might feel 
they could one day silence me

I see, I smell, I taste dreams of childhood 
the voices they fill my script with needed subtext

I store these elements 
in a house with no walls and paper floors
the distance between myself and sanity quintuples
 
I see, I smell, I taste dreams of childhood
I strike the page, the page strikes back 
with neither side claiming victory
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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George   Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 6:57 AM
Much to ponder here, Ricky. Many congrats on your fine win. ~ Elaine
Evans Avatar
January 26, 2021 at 4:46 PM
Thank you Elaine.
Chircop Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 8:50 AM
I see I smell I taste them too..What a lovely sweet nostalgic poem...>>Charma.
Evans Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 10:35 AM
Thanks CC. Lots of emotion was centered around this poem. All the best................peace!
Cresswell Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 2:17 PM
A wonderful choice of words to express the tale that you are telling. It makes me think, 'yes' there is madness in all of us it is just a mater of how each individual deals with their mad moments. Your poem is splendid!
Evans Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 7:45 AM
Your critique of this poem is spot on. I just wanted to let you know that. Thank you...........peace!
Evans Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 2:27 PM
Oh! I've had some extremely mad moments Pat. Poetry has helped me deal with it as you say. Thanks for all your support................peace!
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