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A Farewell To Lovely

the light that shines from poetic lines allows me to labor incessantly through this sojourn please know that I shall not vanquish the voices in my head though the virtuoso might feel they could one day silence me I see, I smell, I taste dreams of childhood the voices they fill my script with needed subtext I store these elements in a house with no walls and paper floors the distance between myself and sanity quintuples I see, I smell, I taste dreams of childhood I strike the page, the page strikes back with neither side claiming victory

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Date: 1/24/2021 6:57:00 AM
Much to ponder here, Ricky. Many congrats on your fine win. ~ Elaine
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Ricky Muse
Date: 1/26/2021 4:46:00 PM
Thank you Elaine.
Date: 11/13/2017 8:50:00 AM
I see I smell I taste them too..What a lovely sweet nostalgic poem...>>Charma.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 11/13/2017 10:35:00 AM
Thanks CC. Lots of emotion was centered around this poem. All the best................peace!
Date: 10/28/2017 2:17:00 PM
A wonderful choice of words to express the tale that you are telling. It makes me think, 'yes' there is madness in all of us it is just a mater of how each individual deals with their mad moments. Your poem is splendid!
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Ricky Muse
Date: 11/27/2021 7:45:00 AM
Your critique of this poem is spot on. I just wanted to let you know that. Thank you...........peace!
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Ricky Muse
Date: 10/28/2017 2:27:00 PM
Oh! I've had some extremely mad moments Pat. Poetry has helped me deal with it as you say. Thanks for all your support................peace!

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