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A Far Better Man

"Every struggle in my life has been a lesson and made me stronger." --Constance La France I know that I am a far better man for my sorrow The worst times of my life increased my strength Through tears, I always see a brighter tomorrow. I try to live with my own woes, never borrow When facing others’, holding them at arms-length I know that I am a far better man for my sorrow. When depression attempts to land a lethal blow And I find myself drowning, teetering on the brink, Through tears, I always see a brighter tomorrow. I visualize better days while crying into my pillow, Determined not to allow all my pleasures to sink I know that I am a far better man for my sorrow. Between the best and worst of times in the tarot I have come to understand there is an indelible link Through tears, I always see a brighter tomorrow. During the worst times, I plow a straighter furrow I row harder, not allowing myself to go over the brink, I know that I am a far better man for my sorrow Through tears, I always see a brighter tomorrow.
[Theme - #1 - Introspection]
FIRST PLACE WINNER Written November 14, 2022 Submitted to “WRITING CHALLENGE – “V” Forms” Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France

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Date: 12/1/2022 3:48:00 PM
Congratulations, Milton!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/1/2022 8:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim.
Date: 11/30/2022 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/30/2022 8:57:00 AM
Thanks so much, Sara.
Date: 11/28/2022 10:09:00 AM
Milt, a beautiful Villanelle poem, I love it. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge, V Forms inspired by my quote, well done, blessings
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/28/2022 12:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance, for this fine contest and my placement. I really enjoyed writing for it.
Date: 11/23/2022 8:35:00 PM
"Through tears, I always see a brighter tomorrow" - Beautiful.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/23/2022 9:28:00 PM
Thank you, Chris. I really appreciate your comment.
Date: 11/17/2022 12:58:00 PM
this is what optimism is all about "Through tears, I always see a brighter tomorrow."
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/17/2022 1:50:00 PM
I think so, and I believe there is a brighter tomorrow... always.
Date: 11/15/2022 6:44:00 PM
Sorrow - the prelude to joy (not to mention discovery). Cheers, Gershon
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/15/2022 6:53:00 PM
Thanks, gw. I do think so!
Date: 11/14/2022 10:26:00 AM
Life can be cruel indeed Milton but we should never give up on the hope that the sun will rise again in our hearts. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/14/2022 12:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tom, for your thoughtful and insightful response to my poem.

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