A Fantasy Affair

One day I wandered to a meadow where nature’s springtime was beyond compare, for lovely flowers I saw dancing there in May’s breeze, and fragrant was the air. A woman swayed among the blossoms unaware that I – a stranger – was entranced and could not bear to turn away, so I crouched down low that I might stare at this lass who lithely twirled and her face so fair! Yellow daisies decorated her long hair which shone like gold in sun’s dawning glare. Her essence was that of someone with no care. Alas! She spotted me. I’d given her a scare. As she fled, I felt a sort of strange despair, for the ending of an all-to-brief fantasy affair!

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Date: 10/9/2022 3:43:00 PM
Love this magical flow of rhyme and the story of a fantasy affair.
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Date: 10/7/2022 9:09:00 AM
Back with congratulations. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it the other day. Sara
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Date: 10/7/2022 8:41:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. Smashing poem. I have written for so many contests where one of the rules just doesn’t gel in my head. It’s easily done, but Milt’s clearly a flexible fella and gave due recognition. Terry
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/7/2022 9:25:00 AM
yeah, that rule totally got past me. thanks, Terry
Date: 10/7/2022 7:59:00 AM
Loved your rhymes and your story, Andrea. I think it would have moved up the list, but it was not really a "single stanza." Congratulations!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/7/2022 9:25:00 AM
good grief. I am so crazy to see the words single stanza and not even let it register. Thanks anyway for the win. I had no idea where I'd go with that monorhyme until I just let it write itself.
Date: 10/7/2022 7:08:00 AM
Delightful story Andrea. Your rhyming and imagery is spot on. Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Date: 10/6/2022 11:24:00 PM
I could picture this fantastic scenario. Pity she escaped. Could have been the beginning of a great friendship.
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Date: 10/6/2022 5:58:00 PM
Delightful, Andrea ~
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Date: 10/6/2022 4:12:00 PM
A moment of transforming bliss...how many affairs do we have in a lifetime of observing humanity? Cool, AD. :o)
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Date: 10/6/2022 3:19:00 PM
WoW! Andrea, How long have I been here? I said all that to say I've been a big fan of your gift since the moment I have arrived. You just keep getting better and better. I am in awe of you. Great rhymes and content. Best wishes in the contest. It is a winner in my book. Have a great evening, my friend:-)Alexis
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/6/2022 9:20:00 PM
Such high praise. Thank you.
Date: 10/6/2022 2:22:00 PM
Lovely theme in her being surprised by you...
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Date: 10/6/2022 2:06:00 PM
nature’s springtime was beyond compare, for lovely flowers, I saw dancing there Enjoyed reading this awesome gem, Andrea. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/6/2022 1:46:00 PM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I think you have done a good job on this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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