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A family praising


A gather of hands
A feasting at dinnertime
Hear the sounds of smiles

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/27/2010 8:26:00 AM
Hi, Laura. I haven't seen your poetry posted lately, and I really have missed it. Your lovely Haiku is so touching. I feel the warmth of a close family enjoying dinnertime...a feast of hearty food...yes, I can hear those smiles! I hope you are enjoying your Thanksgiving Holiday with your family. I wish you the best in everything you do. Smile, God loves you. Peace and Love, Andrew.
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Date: 10/30/2010 3:17:00 PM
Nice poem. And thank you for commenting on my poem.
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Date: 10/30/2010 2:05:00 PM
A beautiful haiku Laura and thank you for your comments today ;)
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Date: 10/29/2010 4:29:00 PM
I must speak for all when I say its wonderful to see your words flowing on my screen again. Hoe your well, missed your poems..Michael
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Date: 8/28/2010 10:26:00 PM
Hope all is well with u my friend... and all your troubles behind u now... looking forward to your communications again... I got married on Aug. 22nd and am very happy now.... we will talk when u return luv.. happy weekend...
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Date: 8/20/2010 12:32:00 AM
"Hear the sounds of smiles" Wow! I am awe-struck here. A verse along with the haiku that is absolutely incredible. Wow.. Love, Sami.
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Date: 7/27/2010 10:25:00 AM
love the last line , congrats on your win
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Date: 7/27/2010 7:51:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your newest poem today Laura. I want to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. I didn't want to leave it on my congratulations comment to you though. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/27/2010 6:07:00 AM
Congratulations Laura on your win in Linda-Marie Bariana's contest "Heavenly Haiku". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/26/2010 8:55:00 PM
Wondefrul!! congratulations
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Date: 7/26/2010 8:50:00 PM
Nice haiku with great images to convey your thought
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Date: 7/26/2010 7:55:00 PM
There is nothing like a family gathered around the table ~ you captured the beauty of that so well ~
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Date: 7/26/2010 4:06:00 PM
Congrats, Laura. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 7/26/2010 2:58:00 PM
Oh yes, wonder sounds of loving smiles. Congratulations on your worthy place, and a fine one to your credit. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/26/2010 2:22:00 PM
Congrats Laura on your fourth place win in my Heavenly Haiku contest.. amazing ...and thankxxx for supporting my contest endeavors..with luv..
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Date: 7/26/2010 11:12:00 AM
~ And, "My Love & Warmth to Your Dear, Always," John! ~ Smile, "May Your Day Be Laced With Love, Amid The Light of Your Eyes," Bye Dear!:) ~
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Date: 7/26/2010 11:11:00 AM
Smile ~ "A family praising" ~ "A gathering of hands; A feasting at dinnertime; Hear the sounds of smiles." ~ Smile, not only is this a very lovely image which Your Brightness has brushed upon this splendid canvas, but also, the many possibilties within thoughts of, many kind and beautiful and loving moments shared, upon these paths of windings life ~ "Beautiful Laura" ~ "My Love & Warmth to Your Dear, Always," John! ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 7/26/2010 10:17:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your haiku tonight, if this is for the contest, all the best.. Bb Wilma
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Date: 7/26/2010 10:06:00 AM
How lovely Laura. Nice to hear from you. Thank you for your comments. Love, Joyce
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