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A Family In Desperation

(I composed this after seeing a picture of a family of father, mother, and two small 
boys resting on the bare ground alongside a freight train.  They had their few 
possessions with them and were waiting for a chance to get a free ride, I assumed 
to where the father had better prospects of employment.  All of them were cheaply-
dressed, but clean.  The father was going through his billfold, possibly counting their 
remaining cash.  The mother sat with her hand partly covering her face—it seemed 
to me in exhaustion rather than shame.  The boys were too young to fully 
comprehend the situation, but sat quietly rather than playing as one might expect 
from children.)

A Family in Desperation

By Elton Camp

What series of events brought this about?
This family has seen better days, no doubt
A normal life they clearly once enjoyed
The father somehow became unemployed

A lesser man might have just walked away
Yet, with his own, this one chose to stay
Mother and wife might have given in to hate
She knew that her place was with her mate

A better chance they are leaving to gain
And hope to get a free ride on the train
It’s, to me, a picture of courage in despair
Of a family to which life has been unfair

Where will the four be able to sleep tonight?
Of supper will they get to share a single bite?
The final outcome who can possibly know
May they have success wherever they go

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/2/2011 5:52:00 PM
Thank-you for your recent comment. I sometimes take a while to reply. This piece is a haunting one--with a subtle appreciation on your part which I enjoyed very much. There are so many heroic figures in life. You have done a very good job with this.
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Date: 3/2/2011 3:24:00 PM
Hey Raskin, I like your suggestion and will see what I can do with enlarging the poem. It is a poem that I wrote based on a picture so in the original version depended on the reader also seeing the picture. That filled in the details. You can see it if you go here http://www.scribd.com/doc/49759803/A-Family-in-Desperation Elton
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Date: 3/2/2011 2:51:00 PM
Such a kind heart, perhaps they are better off since your prayers obviously went with them nice write, perhaps you can put your skill to work for my contest MYTH please check itout! Light & Love
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