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A Families Goodbye's

When the telegram came I entered another world So many questions with so few answers Why did you have to go on that last tour Thoughts without you, how do I tell our children The morning arrives when our family parts in presence But our love will remain in our hearts and souls We will stand proud amidst the sadness And say our goodbye's at the folding of the flag Heartfelt sympathies grace his memories as we absorb the warmth from family, friends and colleagues The long walk back to the car has me looking over my shoulder, hoping that I'll see you one more time Conversations abound in the periphery, whilst tears interject on this emotional day Through the voices I look one last time, silence I now meet Without you in our lives, we now reside in an empty apartment .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/14/2014 8:53:00 AM
this one heart wrenching.. each succeding line intesifies the yearning... and again i dare dat that ad i go on im beginning to likr your poetry more and more.. Adding you to my faves.:)
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James Fraser
Date: 10/14/2014 4:43:00 PM
Thank you so much Olive. I'm glad you've enjoyed what you've read. I'm smiling, James....... :) :)
Date: 11/29/2010 5:47:00 PM
Good luck in the contest if an entry..Reads like winners' circle for sure..Very expressive and emotive work..One of your best..I was gladden that you stopped by my work and commented..Sara
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Date: 11/22/2010 4:17:00 PM
Genuine grief and sadness fill your poem, James. So many families lose their children in battle and can relate to the "emptiness" you describe so poignantly. Best wishes in the contest, Highlander! Love and peace, Carolyn
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Date: 11/22/2010 11:04:00 AM
James, you have captured the emotions so well in this write. Once again a different approach and you do it so captivating.. I am in awe..
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Date: 11/22/2010 9:50:00 AM
Hello James, Thank you for checking in on me, your words have helped me more than you know. This really hit home, as I am sure a lot of us may relate to its message. So beautiful As Always, Shar
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Date: 11/22/2010 5:13:00 AM
Very deep and carries so much emotion JAMES!
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Date: 11/21/2010 4:14:00 PM
As Francine said below, this is very touching ,and I hope it does well in the contest, James.
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Date: 11/21/2010 1:47:00 PM
very touching entry for the contest , best of luck James
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