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''A Fallen Leaf''

I am a Fall leaf- just f l o a t i n g down a clear stream, quiet the ripples; I make on this l o n g journey, calm- SERENE in the water. I, a fallen leaf- swirling, w h i r l i n g in the stream, with silent ripples; and in my d e a t h and decay, I am- BEAUTIFUL. __________________ August 26, 2017 Poetry/Tanka/"A Fallen Leaf" Copyright Protected, ID 17-9337-11-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Submitted into the Contest 400 sponsor, Brian Strand Third Place

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Date: 2/20/2018 11:16:00 AM
Lovely Constance, congratulations...
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Date: 2/20/2018 5:58:00 AM
A touching poem! Congrats, Constance!
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Date: 2/19/2018 11:50:00 PM
Exquisite imagery, Constance - I adore this! Congrats, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 2/19/2018 7:41:00 PM
BW, I don't remember this one. It is beautiful in its simplicity and smoothness. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 2/19/2018 7:43:00 PM
OOPS....I did see it and comment on it before....it has gotten better with time.
Date: 2/19/2018 7:40:00 PM
Awesome beauty in your words. A definite FAVE for me. Divine little poem, BW. Congrats on your most deserving win.
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Date: 2/19/2018 7:16:00 PM
How beautiful and profound--my newest favorite! Congrats, Constance! Janice
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Date: 2/19/2018 6:47:00 PM
Serene and superb. Congratulations Broken Wings on your wonderful win with your beautifully expressed poem. ~Susan
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Date: 2/19/2018 6:44:00 PM
Love the creative "fall", Constance! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 2/19/2018 5:37:00 PM
There is beauty in the simplicity of a single leaf...indeed !! And in a lovely poem as this! Congratulations, Constance!!
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Date: 8/27/2017 8:21:00 AM
The solemn cycles of nature. Beautifully done BW
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Date: 8/26/2017 10:18:00 PM
Another gorgeous poem. I love reading your work BW. GL with this one as well.
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Date: 8/26/2017 3:04:00 PM
love this thoughtful write x
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Date: 8/26/2017 10:03:00 AM
Very nice Broken Wings. I can see it happening :)
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Date: 8/26/2017 8:56:00 AM
Beautiful you are indeed, Constance, lovely write:)
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