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HIKU any English language variation on the Japanese haiku

neath the chestnut tree flakes of green,cover this scene- autumn blankets me

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Date: 10/8/2021 12:35:00 PM
Your "A FALL hiku" is a wonderful write. Few words with much said. I love chestnuts. Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Brian Strand
Date: 10/9/2021 12:20:00 AM
The link between colour & stark sculpture of winter Paula
Date: 10/8/2021 10:30:00 AM
I love the way this haiku describes the current stage of autumn, when there is still green to be seen. Very nice!
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Date: 10/9/2021 12:21:00 AM
An interim month Evelyn in these parts..cold &heat ,light& dak all in 24 hours
Date: 10/8/2021 8:12:00 AM
Very appropriate one for fall, Brian. (regarding popcorn, I do not have trouble with it in my teeth. I will have to call you the muffin man!!)
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Brian Strand
Date: 10/9/2021 12:24:00 AM
You,ll get there Andrea..only a. question of time
Date: 10/8/2021 7:42:00 AM
Beautiful vibrant imagery of Fall, Brian. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Brian Strand
Date: 10/9/2021 12:26:00 AM
A melancholic elegance for sure Susan