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A Fall Day

. A day to view magnificent color when F resh apples and pears cling to trees and autumn A utomaticly turns deep olive green leaves L epid burgundy, gold, deep red some fall drift L azily or lifted by zephry air or blow on by D elighting all eyes that view change and my A rt paints what beauty passes by my window Y earning now for that color to start falling Written: August 30, 2012 Sponsor: Francine Roberts Contest: Autumn Acrostic

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Jim Joyce

Date: 9/6/2012 5:48:00 PM

cool poem ...love the originality of it :)))))

Jack Horne

Date: 9/1/2012 1:45:00 PM

I love this lovely acrostic, Sara

Erich Goller

Date: 8/31/2012 10:42:00 AM

beautiful Autumn, beautiful expressed Acrostic poem, I enjoyed reading it, God bless you.Hugs!Erich

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/30/2012 5:46:00 PM

Sara; This is a beautiful poem for autumn. I like it and wish you luck in the contest. Lucilla

Cindy Cayton

Date: 8/30/2012 5:39:00 PM

Excellent poetry as always with admiration for your inspiring appreciative poetry, much love, Cindy

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/30/2012 5:31:00 PM

Wow, this is truly one of the best in the contest Sara, you should do extremely well! I loved the way you talked about the changing of the colors of the leaves within your write, that is my favorite part...then you have the zephyr of air that comes through...what beauty you write my friend! You sure did paint a great image in my mind, and I really enjoyed that! What a wondrous piece, Great Work!!