A Fall

Life is like a pitfall,a quick pull to out the fall; There is one way other than all; Direct your life, you will find a wall; Start digging it up, it will help you crawl; It will take sometime, but will reach you above all; Then you will wonder, why this happened at all; Life is a guide, that teaches above all; Start comparing to other, without impairing at all; Wait and watch, you will be in that pitfall. Motivation : Simple Day Simple Thought Motto: This poem discuss two perpectives of life one being physical like real pit fall and other being life as a hard struggle.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/5/2024 11:25:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.