A Fake World

A  FAKE WORLD
The truth stood downcast in the lie
 Its chin upon chest and hands tied
Shoulders drooped with a hunching back
Gagged, maimed barely able to sigh
 
Chained mercilessly in a  cell
The truth stood downcast in the lie
Prisoner of outrageous guile
Its wings clipped, unable to fly

Thieves were rulers, all saints were tried
Life was dirt cheap and  facts so dear
The truth stood downcast in the lie
Thorns bloomed across, flowers were rare

No groans were heard, its lips were sealed
A tearful soul lay crushed beneath
Weeping sore wounds too deep to dry
The truth stood downcast in the lie

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Aug11, 2016
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The truth stood downcast in the lie
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Y. Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 7:39 PM
Hi Sushma, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis
Singh Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 9:56 PM
Thanks!
Haight Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 3:13 PM
Very heartfelt, Sushma, and a well-written Quatern. Congratulations on you fine placement in the contest. Sandra
Singh Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 9:57 PM
Thank you, Sandra!
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 2:30 PM
Very powerfully penned Sushma congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Singh Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 9:58 PM
Thanks, Jan!
Scars Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 10:51 AM
Sushma, congrats on your placement with this amazing quatern :)-luloo
Singh Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 11:40 AM
Thanks!
Kendrick Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 9:45 AM
Congrats..Sara
Singh Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 9:52 AM
Thanks!
Lawless Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 9:13 AM
Sushma, I find this to be a very vague metaphor for so many aspects of life and lies...and the death of truth. Thanks for participating in the contest.
Singh Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 9:35 AM
Thank you.
Haight Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 3:05 PM
Very sad and powerfully expressed, Sushma. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra
Singh Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 8:09 PM
Thanks, Sandra Feel touched by your appreciation.
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