A Faith Worse Than Death

Afghanistan! would anybody give a damn
perhaps had a chance, under Uncle Sam 
They gave them weapons, to fight Talibans
enslavers of women, for pleasures of man

Kabul was thriving, the west brought calm
young ladies attend school, sitting exams
Mullahs hid in exile, with extremist Imams
Allowed back in, by surrendering Afghans

Another failed state, turns hardline Islam 
say they've changed, nah just a big scam
The door was opened, they choose to slam
right back to poverty, from where it began 

Religious fanatics, resume same old sham
beheadings, torturing, cut off some hands
Warped Sharia law, interpretation of Koran 
no A la carte, only one recipe, Allah flambe *

US couldn't stay forever, done all they can 
must watch Russia, China, Nth Korea, Iran
In tragic war situations, there's no exit plan 
want to point a finger, start with bin laden 

* Play on (A la Flambe) no offence intended
to moderate peaceful Muslims*

Afghanistan Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann
25/08/2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 9/28/2021 2:24:00 PM
A most flowing write on a most cracked point of our Earth. Concise. The subject could be considered beyond poetry, but I’m so glad you didn’t think so. Thank you, David!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 9/28/2021 3:16:00 PM
Thank you Sally, I really like to think no subject should be beyond poetry, I know this is a westerners point of view, and I would be considered an infidel by hardline Muslims, hundreds of Afghan women judges are in hiding being hunted down by taliban fighters seeking revenge, I really hope they make it out alive, cheers David
Date: 8/25/2021 8:22:00 PM
Exceptional write with a relevant view of what is happening in Afghanistan. Some will agree; others will not. Makes no difference. It was time to get out...and no one could have closed out the war with any less chaos and confusion. Biden can't and certainly Trump couldn't! Uh, what was that about a deal Trump made with the Taliban??????????
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David Kavanagh
Date: 8/25/2021 10:16:00 PM
Thank you Milton, Trump is just trying to look good in a bad situation, this was already on the cards when he was in power, the end game is sad but inevitable, just like the chaos when Vietnam finished, I don't care if people disagree with my poem, if they have an alternative I'd love to hear it, like I said US has bigger issues to deal with I named a few, cheers David
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