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A Fair Warning

How deep this pain and fear runs through my aching heart as I weep tears for flesh and blood bruised by a life that is often unkind my anger feeds on acid thoughts as I prepare to crush what has threatened my world Beware and step lightly for I am on your heels know that you will fall by my hand I will not rest until I destroy you and I am sure all that I love is safely out of reach from your evil presence

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Matthew Anish

Date: 7/22/2009 4:03:00 PM

New form to me! You sound convincing in this show ofyour strength. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/19/2009 1:59:00 PM

Ferocious!!! John H Loving III

Faire Lucas

Date: 4/14/2009 4:06:00 PM

very scary and forbidding write..i like it...i hope u keep making poems cause ur very good at it...Love Faire

Sue Mason

Date: 4/11/2009 3:20:00 PM

Wouldn't want to be on the receiving end of this one, Robin ... LOL ... very scary write ... don't think I've ever seen this Form before ... have to look it up ... great writing. Do I have your day/month for your birthday? Would love to sing/blog if I could ...

John Rhinem

Date: 4/11/2009 1:40:00 PM

I wanted to help bump this wonderful write up into the soups famed 100 hot hits chart; so I thought I would stop by it one more time~Smile~"Hello Priceless and Beautifully Gifted Robin!!!":):)~Just wanted to stop by to "Wish You and All of Your Loves A Beautiful Easter Dear Lady~Wrapped In Lots and Lots of Love, Always, John!!!":):) Bye Robin ~

Brian Strand

Date: 4/10/2009 1:04:00 AM

Like the visual style of this form Robin.Rgds Brian

John Rhinem

Date: 4/10/2009 12:05:00 AM

...."Thank You Again Precious & Priceless Robin~Not only for these words from "Your Beautiful Heart & Soul," but also for giving me the heads up?! And as to the truth within regards to "Your Annointed Strength," in being able to handle these demonic attacks upon "You & Your Loved Ones Lives!!?":):)~Smile~Yes, "You Are So Beautifully Radiant & Empowered With The Glories of Light!!!!":):)~Smile~"Sweet Dreams & 'Happy Easter' To You All Again Dear Robin!!!!":):) Bye ~

John Rhinem

Date: 4/9/2009 11:49:00 PM

Romans 12:9-21:) Yes, this is a very wonderful passage. Robin~one of my very favorites also dear lady!!!:):)~12:9~"Let your love be without hypocracy. Abhor what is wicked, cling to what is good. In brotherly love have tender affection for one another. In showing honor toward one another take the lead"...."Return evil for evil to no one"...."Do not avenge your yourselves, beloved, but yield place to the wrath; for it is written: "vengence is mine; I will repay, sayeth the Lord...."~cont~

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/9/2009 8:50:00 PM

Powerful piece Robin, I hope things work out and that evil presence leaves you and your family alone...Raul

Laurie Ginn

Date: 4/9/2009 7:50:00 PM

Shoot you drew the line in the sand and I doubt anyone or anything would be stupid enough to step over it. You go girl!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/9/2009 7:39:00 PM

Dear Robin, My what a beautiful come uppence I so hope YOU let (him) read this Beware the wrath of a woman's Heart Protection of family and friends comes FIRST Stay on his heels and "Crush Him" raw emotions in this write I'm with YOU in Heart and Spirit LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/9/2009 3:26:00 PM

Very powerful poetry, Robin! Don't let an "evil presence" invade your family. I'm glad you are ready to fight back. You have enormous strength. Love, Carolyn

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 4/9/2009 3:15:00 PM

Oh Robin..this is a truly heartfelt poem....it is done really well.....sad but nicely written....nice work!...Maryam~

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/9/2009 1:47:00 PM

Robin, so appreciate your comment and explanation. Powerful, fiercely protective as is second nature to a loving mom. I would feel the exact same way in your shoes. Poetically, this is outstanding. Emotionally I am so caught up in your feelings, I sense the rage and anger of knowing what I would never put up with and let happen either. Hope and pray this ends swiftly and easily. Will be thinking of you. Love & hugs, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/9/2009 1:28:00 PM

Strong writing my friend.. love the title..the ending to this piece is very strong...the voice is bold and reassured...thanks for the love on my work.

John Rhinem

Date: 4/9/2009 12:19:00 PM

....I hope "Your Priceless Life," has been going wonderfully for "You" leading up to this Good Friday and Easter Weekend!!!?:):)~It sounds as though it has or soon shall be, by the beauty of this lovely poem here!!!?:):)~Smile, I absolutely loved "Your Glow" within this jewel of "Light!!!":):)~"My Love Always & Forever To 'You & Your Loves,' Eternally, John!!!":):) Bye Dear Lady ~

John Rhinem

Date: 4/9/2009 12:12:00 PM

I love this powerful declaration of soul, heart and mind!!!:):)~It is filled with "The Mighty Hand of God"~Whom declared through The Apostle Paul that, "I did not give You a spirit of fear, but of power, love and a sound mind...."~"Good Afternoon Talented, Precious & Beautiful Robin!!!":):)....cont...

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/9/2009 12:02:00 PM

I looked it up! you nailed it! Robin, really incredible talent, and if there hadn't been a classification, I would of never known, your poem is really cool!! jmg

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 4/9/2009 12:02:00 PM

WOW! ...wouldn't want to get on your badside! You go girl!! Trash 'em!!! Blessings and hugs, Keith