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A Fading Valentine

Winded . . .
jogging the shoreline past knee high surf
shirt sullied
front to back
like Jack Frost at recess in the noonday sun 

Huffing an extra moment
while puffing at the lakeside air
Musing at your approach
gazing puppet-like
to your breath-robbing  stride

Enticing
yet demure
you side-step surf
framed with endless sand and comber wave

Passing within a smile's length
Synchronizing your intended dance
with a smiling glance
Only. . .
you're met with silence
while the sounds of surf
gently fade
below the pulse in my throbbing chest

My one line arsenal
timorous
left home by the mirror

My response ?

A sheepish urge to flip driftwood
with an idle foot

Another potential Valentine
swept away
like the water erasing your steps

The drifting wood
strikes my unguarded ankle
~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/16/2014 1:47:00 PM
good imagery. surely you are published in many venues.
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Rex Mccoy
Date: 3/17/2014 2:06:00 PM
I am published in two Anthologies... Nothing that makes me any money or brings me any fame :)
Date: 2/12/2014 7:33:00 AM
I see you are a romantic. When I was young I too could fall in love in an infinite minute.
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Date: 2/10/2014 8:32:00 PM
Rex, very deep. enjoyed the second look to love. .. Skat
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Date: 2/10/2014 2:39:00 PM
A great one from you Rex; I really enjoy it. Kudos.
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Date: 2/10/2014 2:35:00 PM
Not sure if this is an ode to drift wood Rex or unrequited love...love your writing style...pete, the bear on the bog...
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