A Face of Age Yet Beautiful

A face of age, a septuagenarian that magically reverts to my twenties when I turn away from the mirror. 

My hair of silver does what it pleases to cover my face. I can't move one side of my face, a condition they call Bell's Palsy. Flirty, half fallen, silky gray hair that helps me cover the one side. My forehead smooths out from the left and slight creases on the right. My eyebrows are small; a student describing them like commas.

When I was younger, my large brown eyes and long dark lashes were the focal point of my face. 

As the years moved on, erosion has chosen to leave me with bloodshot eyes; one normal the other droopy and dry as the sands of the Sahara Desert whether from the constant irritation or the countless sleepless night.

I've always had a round face with freckles and a small turned-up nose that is a beacon of shine if it's not powdered. I am very fortunate, I have no wrinkles around my eyes, but two smile lines that crinkle on either side of my nose. 

My lips are not like a lot of women, plump, I inherited my father's small thin lips. As a teen, I would gloomily glare in the mirror hating the way they looked. My teeth are not quite perfect, but I might remind you of a chipmunk. They're not noticeable since I am not able to smile. If I don't, I look very normal, but a look of scowling.

A face of age yet beautiful.



12/26/2019

Poetry Contest: The Metaphor Of Your Face 
Sponsored BY: John Lawless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 1/4/2020 10:42:00 PM
What I like about this is the shameless honesty and its indelible intimacy. To me it's what all powerful poetry is about, touching souls fearlessly. I learned more about you Eve in these few lines than in all your higher placing poems of praise. Yes Eve, you are beautiful. Thanks for your thoughtfulness and kindness to me. I'm honored to know you.
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Date: 12/27/2019 8:06:00 PM
To me your face shines from your beauty within dear Eve, for your words of poetry bring that beauty to the surface. A gorgeous read and I see a top placement for this gem. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 12/27/2019 11:03:00 AM
I have sadly acquired a condition I call "dry eye" and it is rather awful. This is a terrific tribute to youth and reality, Eve.
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Date: 12/27/2019 11:37:00 AM
Yes, that is my dilemma from the removable of the tumor on that side. Chorionic dry eye and I have to live the rest of my life with the use of RESTASIS and other meds. plus plugs they place in my tear ducks
Date: 12/26/2019 7:50:00 PM
This was sadly lovely. I have wrinkles at the eyes. My mother who hates me, told me once it was from smiling too much. I like to smile. I would rather have the wrinkles... I see you... in your words. A lovely write, a lovely person and an extremely lovely poet, well versed in brush and paint... Ann
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Date: 12/26/2019 7:30:00 AM
I can place myself with wrinkles on aged face, clusters of hair once dense n dark now turning grey n thinner etc..inevitable through aging. Yet face of old age has own charm. So nicely penned. I admire.
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Date: 12/26/2019 6:03:00 AM
Wow.. i think many who age will relate to this.. this is just brilliant idea for the contest..
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