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6/30/2024 for Abracadabra Rhyme Poetry Contest sponsored by Emile Pinet

A Face for Comedy

An eager youth, she had me hypnotized. 
To my love to be, a rose, I gifted.  
She looked at me and laughed, "You must be daft",  
That lovely girl then helpfully advised,
"You've not a face for love, but comedy". 
I suppose, I should not have been surprised.  
Years hence, I returned with love poetry, 
My mug, carefully concealed and disguised.
Giggling, to see me, my mask she lifted.  
"You must be daft", she looked at me and laughed, 
"Funny looks, poetry to be despised!"
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mysore Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 10:19 PM
congratulations dear poet. it is such a difficult form and you got it perfect. happy writing, three cheers!!!
Crandall Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 3:33 PM
Thank you Thriveni for your encouraging words. I enjoyed writing it.
Empress Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 10:14 PM
This is so sad and deeply moving write on the form. I dont know how anyone can be so heartless. However you did deliver a poem worthy of all the accolades on this subject! Well done! Pleasure reading this, congratulations on your placement,
Crandall Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 3:31 PM
Thanks Ink Empress. Haha, I think I exaggerated to villain of this story!
Woods Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 10:15 AM
Omg! DAVID! This is awesome... sad but the poetry, form, it's amazing! You deserve your place in this contest and second is quite an accomplishment!! I hope this is fiction though. Because you deserve love and appreciation for who you are. Xoxo
Crandall Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 4:10 PM
uplifting...better word! :-)
Crandall Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 4:09 PM
Thanks Crystol - I love your cheerful comments!
Pinet Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 1:21 PM
Congratulations David! Your humorous poem placed "Second" in my PoetrySoup contest. It stood out with its superb use of comedy in a difficult format. Very well done, my friend.
Crandall Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 1:25 PM
Wow! That's great Emile - it was fun putting it together!
Greenhough Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 6:54 AM
I see the young lady lacks tact. I hope she didn't break your heart.
Crandall Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 9:09 AM
lol! I don't think so, because he's still writing poetry!
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