A Encounter To Remember

continued from Pt 1



       That night alone in my loft, I could not stop thinking of my encounter with that gorgeous 
girl.  My thoughts seemed transfixed on her and nevermind the world.  That woman radiated 
just so much sexual power.  I took off my shirt and pants to take a long hot shower.  
Removing my wallet from my pants a piece of paper fluttered to the floor.  A womans name 
and number I had not seen before.  A few words inscribed "Call me, Lenore."  I felt a tingling 
vibe I could not ignore. 
       I walked over to the phone, looked at the number and dialed.  After a few rings a 
womans voice answered and my heart smiled.  I could not find my voice. In those few 
seconds I was faced with a choice.  Again she said "Hello."  It was do or die and she knew I 
was not a Romeo.  I then begin to talk non-stop.  For her boldness was apparent earlier that 
day at the coffee shop


Note: I tried to print a picture of how a man who is not so lucky with women can be so 
overwhelmed with desire, so attracted to a woman...He literally runs away because of his 
lack of self confidence!  So help us out womenl  lol  If you know a man is utterly attracted to 
you and you feel the same way (let us know)!  lol
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Haick Avatar
November 25, 2009 at 4:49 PM
The book, Jimmy! Write the book! Or write the comic, if that's easier- just keep writing! Peace and love, Audrey
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October 30, 2009 at 1:13 PM
Nice one Jimmy! It was fun reading what goes through a man's mind when he sees an attractive woman. As far as the help goes... Get your courage on cause you might just be on your own!!! 'cause girls are shy, too- some are. Very cute story. Lovingly, Dane
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