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A Dusk In Time Premiere Contest Winner

Still bodies piling in spooky dress longing for last touch of sweet caress. On the street are young hearts lying lifeless. Shouting joy at this point and time is heartless. In the blink of eye, hopeful souls faded away. The clear horizon suddenly turned to a mist of gray. What some could do was to drop their knees and pray but muttered words were all that they could say. May such misfortune in such dusk of time not happen again for the orphaned hearts hardly find a way to take the pain. May God bless the souls of the hearts that were slain so the lives they lived will not fall on the hands of vain. One could hardly think that time would give birth to an ache like this. May the faded souls find a way to climb the hills of bliss so the mourning love will not ache so much for the hearts they miss. May the lips of rapture greet the weeping evening with a calming kiss. October 31, 2022 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 19 Contest (1st place) Sponsor: Mark Toney Judged: November 11, 2022 February 6, 2023 2022 Poetry Marathon Qualifiers' Final Placement Poetry Contest (24th place overall, from 267 days and 945 poems) Sponsor: Mark Toney

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Date: 3/4/2023 9:49:00 PM
Dear Roger, I'm happy to return and offer you my heartiest congratulations for your final placement in Mark's Marathon contest. Also, it's wonderful to immerse myself in the gripping emotions of your compassionate poem once again. Such a poignant and potent piece! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 3/4/2023 10:12:00 PM
Thank you very much.... I'm glad it made it to the finals...
Date: 3/4/2023 1:50:00 PM
Roger, after 267 days, 27 contests, and 945 submitted poems, we've reached the finish line of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Congratulations on placing 24th overall in the marathon! Thank you so much for contributing to the success of the contest. There is no provision to denote this in the Standard Contest other than Honorable Mention. The poems of the 28 qualifiers can be accessed from my current "Finish Line" blog post, along with the top 15 placements and their overall stats. Write on!
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 3/4/2023 3:52:00 PM
Thank you very much.... It's an honor... I'll be glad to be joining again...
Date: 11/13/2022 10:44:00 PM
There is much compassion and sympathy in your lines. My heart goes out to these victims and their grieving families and friends. Congratulations for your top win for this emotionally moving poem.
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Date: 11/13/2022 11:27:00 PM
Thank you very much... Painting feelings through words is really emotionally moving... Like being in the shoes of the relatives...
Date: 11/13/2022 7:47:00 AM
What an outstanding piece dedicated to the Seoul tragedy. This would be an undeniable winner in any contest, Roger. Well done and congratulations!!!
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 11/13/2022 2:04:00 PM
Thank you very much... It's really different when you're trying to paint feelings through words...
Date: 11/11/2022 8:02:00 AM
Roger, your heartrending poem takes me back to when I first heard of the Seoul Halloween disaster. Your words describing the tragic event are surrounded by your kind words of comfort for the survivors and victims. A Fav for me. Congratulations on your first-place finish on Mile 19 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on because Mile 20 has already started.
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Date: 11/11/2022 10:09:00 AM
Thank you very much for the appreciation and the placement... It's my simple way of expressing my sympathy... Trying to paint feelings through words... I wish I could do more to console those who grieve... Thank you very much once again...
Date: 11/11/2022 7:53:00 AM
Dear Roger, your plaintive poem written for the victims of the South Korea tragedy is potent and so very poignant. You capture the unimaginable anguish and heartbreak so poetically. A soaring, sorrowful and soulful piece. Congratulations for your excellent trophy win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/11/2022 9:57:00 AM
Thank you very much... Thank you for appreciating my way of painting feelings through words...
Date: 11/11/2022 7:19:00 AM
Roger, your poem brought tears to my eyes because of the realities of widespread grief and loss you have expressed. CONGRATS on your top win! Janice
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Date: 11/11/2022 9:49:00 AM
Thank you very much... I'm glad to share my simple way of expressing my sympathy to the victims and their families...
Date: 11/1/2022 6:51:00 AM
Wow - this is a powerful write Roger. Very nicely written! Linda Alice
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Date: 11/1/2022 5:24:00 PM
Thank you very much... May God bless the young souls that faded away and those hearts they left without even having a chance to say goodbye...
Date: 10/31/2022 6:06:00 PM
Well said; very heartbreaking, painful to read. Too many in the USA take freedom for granted. It is a precious and rare commodity in this world of strife. Entire populations suffer at the hands dictators. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 10/31/2022 7:52:00 PM
Thanks you very much... It's painful to see loved ones of those who perished weeping for a tragedy that could have been avoided... The untimely demise of a loved one... Not even having the chance to say goodbye... Blessings too my friend...
Date: 10/31/2022 12:34:00 PM
Each stanza a monorhyme - well done! Wow! Tremendously well thought out.
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Date: 10/31/2022 2:33:00 PM
Thank you very much... I wrote it for the victims of South Korea stampede...

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