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Animals Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Constance La France

How lucky I was to inherit a villa! Soon, I bought a tiny duckling for my pond. Quickly and with a smile, I named her Camilla. Together, we soon grew so fond. As I watched her wet her feathers yellow blonde. I built a dog-like box for it to rest. I threw small pieces of soft, wet bread until I gave her proper food that was full of zest. But soon, another tiny duckling came with a shrill. How happy they were as they learnt their drill. And Spring went, and soon it came again. The ducklings played, leaving ripples behind. The pond was then too small, and I built it in a pen. Until one day, I came, and not one bird I could find. Soon, they returned, but wow: three birds were outlined. Placed 2

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Date: 1/21/2025 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/cute ~ write/story. Great Picture. Love It... Have a fun day with your win as you write away..................
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Date: 1/6/2025 3:28:00 AM
That’s so cute Victor, I’d guess those ducks had been sharing a love nest… Beryl
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Date: 1/3/2025 4:25:00 PM
Interesting and cute !
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Date: 1/3/2025 8:26:00 AM
Such a cute picture and poem Victor….Camilla is sweet as….Cuddles….Debx
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Date: 1/2/2025 1:27:00 PM
How adorable Victor! Thank you for sharing your delightful Camilla with us. She is a lucky duck to have you and was sharing her good fortune with her friends!
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Date: 1/2/2025 5:17:00 AM
You brought Camilla to our hearts Victor such a wonderful story of this lovely ducky. I am sure Constance will appreciate this lovely poem for her Constance. Well done my friend, hope you are feeling well and are enjoying your time with your lovely daughter. God bless you and may the good Lord keep you healthy and strong for the New Year...
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Date: 1/1/2025 10:06:00 PM
Your Camilla is a real darling. You put just only one in a pond, but you have three now. How I wish I have such birds coming to my house. A lovely entry for Constance's contest. All the best, dear Victor. Happy New Year to you.
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Date: 12/31/2024 2:33:00 PM
Camilla could charm anyone! This is a darling and engaging story, Victor. :)
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Date: 12/31/2024 12:53:00 PM
Super cute story of Camila the baby duck and all of her siblings. Midnight ushers in the new year. Have a good one , Victor. Lifting my glass, Happy New Year! :D
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Date: 12/31/2024 11:45:00 AM
- An enjoyable and sweet story, Victor :) - Wishing you a blessed new year :) - hugs
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Date: 12/31/2024 11:32:00 AM
An adorable duck story , Victor. Constance should get a kick out of this.
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Date: 12/31/2024 10:49:00 AM
Ducklings are always enjoyable to watch. Cute poem. Hope your holiday was a blessing.
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Date: 12/31/2024 10:29:00 AM
Lovely poem Victor with a cute picture good luck in the contest, sending you my best wishes for the new year.
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Date: 12/31/2024 10:11:00 AM
As I watched her wet her feathers yellow blonde...how bright and delightful! Hugs
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Date: 12/31/2024 9:31:00 AM
An enjoyable read Victor, best of luck in the contest and I hope you have a very happy new year. Tom
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Date: 12/31/2024 8:48:00 AM
It's obvious you have a love for God's creatures. Your poem is endearing
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