Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Poet Limerick

A Drunken Spider

A Drunken Spider

There once was a huge golden-silk spider.
Bobby Joe ran to sit down beside her.
He threw some sticks at her web.
Her frustrations did not ebb.
So, he sprayed on a liquor elixir.

© August 4, 2010
Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 7, 2010 at 6:25 PM Congrats Dane Ann on your winning poem in the Limerick contest with this good one.. enjoy another sweet victory my friend..with luv..

Francine Roberts August 7, 2010 at 10:41 AM congrats on your win

Dr.Ram Mehta August 7, 2010 at 3:57 AM Congrats on your win, Dane

Andrea Dietrich August 6, 2010 at 10:15 PM congratulations on your win, DAne Ann. LOoks like you and I both did spiders!

John Freeman August 6, 2010 at 11:14 AM Congratulation on your drunken spider, Dane. Agape, Moses

James Fraser August 6, 2010 at 10:29 AM Nice one Dane Ann. Spiders are just awesome insects. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn & John's fine contest with this Limerick gem >> James

Carolyn Devonshire August 6, 2010 at 8:42 AM Hmmm -- a new type of insecticide? Very funny, dear friend. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown August 6, 2010 at 8:41 AM Congratulations Dane Ann on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's / John Freeman's contest "Are You Bugged". Love, Carol

John Freeman August 5, 2010 at 3:25 PM 7-21-10 Constance's "Traffic Jam" Really a classic, visual Limerick, Dane. It gave me the inspirations for a "Toronto Classic" double. This one of your's should be well into the winner circle. Thanks for your comments, they are important to me. Agape, Moses

Poet Destroyer A August 4, 2010 at 7:06 PM Haha nice one I literally don't like spiders lol. ..P.D.

Debbie Guzzi August 4, 2010 at 3:08 PM Hey therehoney bun! shiver..spider yucky! Please comment on my blog ;) Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire August 4, 2010 at 2:30 PM Soup mail.

Sara Kendrick August 4, 2010 at 12:04 PM Interesting write..That would be a sight a spider a little bit tipsy..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara