A Drunken Fool's Lovesong

I will mourn for you today,
and ache for the comfort
of when I used to lay my head
across that Buddha belly of yours,
and you used to sing me 
your drunken lullabies
(though I knew no difference
at the time). 

And I will listen
to this song:
mariachis' high-pitched gritos
accompanying the blaring
brass-tasting trumpet players.

This time, when I see you
dancing to it, sombrero atop
your silver strands,
you won't reek
of that amber-colored
death
anymore.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Vaso Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 7:22 PM
Oh my, the title was enticing and the poem did not disappoint, loved how you weaved this.
Elizab Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 8:30 AM
Thank you so much, Arthur!
Martin Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 8:26 PM
Loved this poem, Felicia! Such wonderful imagery and expression! and so deep!!
Elizab Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 11:10 AM
Thank you so much for the kind words, Thomas!
Juman Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 6:26 PM
wonderful I love it--Please do check out mines and tell me what you think
Fairbrother Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 4:28 PM
Nice work Felicia, booze and love only work when your both pissed as nits, then nothing works lol, cheers kev
Elizab Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 4:35 PM
This was actually about my grandfather but when it comes to relationships and booze, you are absolutely right ;)
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