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A Drunk Drivers Guilt

I drove home from a party one winters night
I'd had quite a few drinks but I felt alright
It was pouring rain as I approached our town
My girlfriend said to me, "John will you slow down" .

I turned up the volume of my favorite song
And pressed hard on the pedal speeding along
I was oblivious to everything that lay up ahead
And failed to see a traffic light that was on red.

A blue car suddenly appeared right before me
I found out later it was a young man and his family
There was a loud bang as my airbag deployed
My first thoughts were my boss will be annoyed.

Next thing I knew there were blue lights all around
It was eerily peaceful there wasn't a sound
I just felt so tired all I wanted was my bed
Looked at my girlfriend and I saw she was dead.

The big shock of it all made me come to
I thought this is a bad dream; it can't be true 
A fireman got me out; he had to cut the door
There was glass, metal and blood all over the floor.

Everything was surreal and I woke up in a cell
And this was just the start of my living hell
The four people in the other car they too had died
Along with my girlfriend, I just broke down and cried.

A week later I was in court and I heard a few jeers
The Judge showed no mercy and I got twenty years
Two witnesses were called and said I was to blame
And all I could do was just hang my head in shame.

I'm in prison now all my friends disowned me
And often get flashbacks of that awful tragedy
If only I had got a taxi and chose not to drive
Then those five people I killed would still be alive.

I have trouble sleeping; I just lie there at night
Thinking of a way to try and put things right 
A year later I wrote a book telling my story
Called ,The Drunk Drivers Guilt by John.T. McCrory.

If it stops someone driving and having a drink
Or even makes a driver just stop and think
Then my book will have been worthwhile; every single word.
As a warning to others, making my mistakes heard.

Written 24th January 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Gauthier Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 12:21 PM
What a powerful poem, Tom. So glad it graces the pages of the PS 2020 Anthology. Bravo ~
Cunningham Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 12:26 PM
Thank you very much Line, dispite all the campaigns against it there's still many that choose to risk it with devastating consequences. Hope you're well. Tom
Kauffman Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 11:43 AM
Hi Tom, Congratulations on your POTD! So powerful. Your poems always make me think! This topic is so timely and so important. Not only about drunk driving but about the choices we make in life.
Cunningham Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 2:04 PM
Thank you Sam, so true, we should always think of the consequences of our actions. Tom
Menace Avatar
February 14, 2020 at 7:55 PM
I've apprehended many of these, your words ring very true. I just wish this message would sink in prior to so many peoples nightmares.
Cunningham Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 5:29 AM
Thank you Jeremy, dispite numourous campaigns and graphic images there is still a hard core who take a chance that ends with tragic consequences. Regards. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 3:27 PM
Congrats on your POTD, Tom~ with such an important message.
Cunningham Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 4:02 PM
Thank you very much Line, its a tragedy that you hear about far to often. Tom
Cholt Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 5:29 PM
Great poem Tom. A powerful warning to all who would even dare to drink and drive. This poem should be read in schools, Universities etc.
Cunningham Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 5:11 AM
Thank you very much W.A. , It can be very tempting to have one for the road but there's safe ways of enjoying a drink. Tom
Lindley Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 5:43 AM
Congratulations on this important poem being honored as POTW my friend! Its message true, its flow on cue and your brilliant creativity and insight deserves far greater recognition! A fav,,
Cunningham Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 5:46 AM
Thank you very much Robert, your comment is very much appreciated, coming from a very talented poet such as yourself. I hope you're well. Tom
Messina Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 10:01 PM
Sorry I missed this one, Tom. A powerful poem with a great message. It's like smoking, we all no that it's bad for you, but so many choose to puff away. At least when you smoke you are only killing yourself and not others around you. Belated Congrats on POTW. Charlie
Cunningham Avatar
January 30, 2020 at 6:13 AM
No worries Charlie, if I haven't been too active on soup I spend a week chasing my tail lol. Its really frowned on now but despite campaigns and warnings they still do it. Thank you. Tom
Brown  Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 3:45 PM
Congratulations Tom. A very powerful message in this poem. I will always remember a girl I went to primary school with got killed by a drunk driver. So many tragedies due to drivers' selfish decisions.
Cunningham Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 4:05 PM
Thank you very much Lisa, sadly the message isn't getting to everybody, those selfish ones think the laws don't apply to them. Tom
Callus Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 12:09 PM
How tragic! Unfortunately these 'accidents' occur on a daily basis, despite all the campaigns. ~ congratulations on POTW award, Tom. ~ Regards // paul
Cunningham Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 12:37 PM
Thank you Paul, it seems to be a worldwide problem, so many lives wrecked because someone decided they'd take the risk with no regard for themselves or anyone else. Tom
One Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 3:54 PM
A great message and worthy of potd ...
Cunningham Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 4:11 PM
Thank you S. O. Tom
Romios Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 1:04 PM
Late on congratulating you. So many programs and books, yet people do not listen? I am talking to my grandson about alcoholism and also, to never get in a car with a drunk driver. Call a Taxi, or his parents. Many teens here die that way. The other scary part, Tom, is that a person can look perfectly sober but really are unable to drive. I get in no car with anyone who drank. Thanks and Huge Congrats. Panagiota xx
Cunningham Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 1:16 PM
Thanks very much Panagiota, you're right, even with campaigns to educate people some defy the law and risk not only their lives but innocent bystanders, if they want to kill themselves, jump off a cliff, why take others with you, some are so selfish. Tom
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 11:39 AM
Your poem is so well written and very worthy of POTD Tom. Congratulations! We have traffic checks by police during most holidays and it saves a lot of lives because drivers know ahead of time there will be checks so they make sure they have a designated driver who has had no drinks. xxoo
Cunningham Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 1:12 PM
Thank you Connie, that sounds a sensible precaution having those checks, the police here have campaigns at Christmas and still manage to catch drink drivers. Some will never learn. Tom
Wolf Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 10:35 PM
Hey, Tom, always a great message. 'Course now that mary jane's legal most everywhere, how are they gonna police that?! Can't wn for losing! ! ~ Gershon
Cunningham Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 12:04 AM
Thanks Gershon, a tough one for sure, the only way is by education, I remember the anti smoking campaigns with graphic images of rotting lungs, but then people are still smoking. You're right, you can't win. Tom
Kitchin Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 5:05 PM
Tom an excellent poem with a great message, congratulations on POTD!!
Cunningham Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 5:34 PM
Thank you very much Tania, hope you have a nice weekend. Tom.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 4:36 PM
I see you got POTD! Excellent write and warning!
Cunningham Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 4:55 PM
Thank you very much Kim, sadly many still ignore the warnings and by their actions create tragic consequences. Tom
Doll Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 3:17 PM
A poem worthy of POTD, Tom. Congratulations and Best Wishes~ Warren
Cunningham Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 3:57 PM
Thank you very much Warren, I hope you are well. Tom
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 2:34 PM
Powerfully penned Tom. Congratulations on POTD, xomo!
Cunningham Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 2:57 PM
Thank you very much Maureen, One selfish act by someone can cause so much grief. Tom
Proxenos Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 1:48 PM
Great poem and a fantastic message..Congratulations on your very deserved POTD, a wonderful honor. Blessings, Jennifer.
Proxenos Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 1:45 PM
Hi Tom, a great poem - and a fantastic message. Congratulations on your very deserved POTD, a wonderful honor. Blessings. Jennifer.
Cunningham Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 3:53 PM
Thank you twice lol. Sorted out the problem now. Tom
Andresen Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 1:38 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Tom :) - Have a peaceful Saturday night :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 2:12 PM
Thank you for your return visit Anne, I hope you too have a lovely weekend. Tom
Nicole Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 1:36 PM
This scenario in which you have described, happens all over the world. So sad indeed. For those that drink, this should be a wake up call. Don't drive while drunk. Your thoughts tug deeply at my heart. Congratulations Tom, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Cunningham Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 2:10 PM
Thanks very much Brandy, sadly youre right, it's a worldwide problem and many don't seem to be getting the message that it can cause terrible consequences if they drive while under the influence. Tom Tom
Goldsmith Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 12:45 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. You did a great write. This week I was at a meeting. They could not get the drinks fast enough. I sat there with my coffee looking like the odd one but I could drive home...........
Cunningham Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 1:55 PM
Thanks Paula, I know some can't get enough but at least you got home safe and didnt have a headache the next day. Tom
Shaw Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 11:47 AM
And another 5 tales for those that died, see you back in the cemetery Tom . . . : (
Cunningham Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 1:52 PM
Thanks Indiana, I'll see what the muse can come up with. Lol. Tom
Wanter Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 11:18 AM
Someone I know is celebrating his 9th month!! (Not myself) It is a terribly destructive disease. Congratulations!!
Cunningham Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 1:51 PM
Thank you Sunlite, thankfully I'm not addicted but many are caught in its grip. The problem today is alcohol is easily available and sold cheaply in supermarkets. Tom
Sands Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 9:42 AM
Congratulations for POTD Tom. I hope this important message reaches far and makes a big difference. Well done! :)
Cunningham Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 10:07 AM
Thank you very much Heidi, I would truly honoured if it did. The consequences of drunk drivers are tragic Lives are ruined because of it. Tom
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