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Written 7th August, 2026 for The Beautiful Impossible Poetry Contest sponsored by Sotto Poet

A Drought That Drowns

You do not need a riverbed to drown.
The drought is carried deep within the chest.
There is no water in this quiet room,
Yet sudden silence floods the empty lungs.

The drought is carried deep within the chest,
A cracked and ochre basin of the mind.
Yet sudden silence floods the empty lungs,
And absence brings a current of its own.

A cracked and ochre basin of the mind,
Where reaching for a memory builds a sea.
And absence brings a current of its own,
The sheer starvation rising like a tide.

Where reaching for a memory builds a sea,
You gasp for breath in perfectly dry air.
The sheer starvation rising like a tide,
The devastating weight of being alone.

You gasp for breath in perfectly dry air,
There is no water in this quiet room.
The devastating weight of being alone—
You do not need a riverbed to drown.
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Kerr Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 6:43 AM
I salute this refreshingly candid pantoum and the sheer frankness of each verse and its symbolism, Alison. The burden of loneliness is explored in respecful concrete terms. Truly excellent🔥🔥🔥🔥 Howard
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 4:28 PM
Thank you Howard for your encouraging comment.❤️
Hind Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 7:48 PM
"Where reaching for a memory builds a sea. And absence brings a current of its own, The sheer starvation rising like a tide." wow, dear Alison
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 9:40 PM
Thank you for your feedback .... ❤️
George Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 5:09 AM
Beautiful pantoum. It is not an easy poetic form, yet you have done a wonderful job and have risen well to the spirit of the contest.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 5:20 AM
Thank you Valsa.❤️
Goldsmith Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 1:43 PM
I enjoyed reading. "A Drought That Drowns" is a wonderful write. Great Picture... Great Ending... "Good Luck" I did "The Beautiful Impossible Motion." Have a lovely day writing away..........
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 3:55 PM
Thank you Paula ❤️
Rodrigues Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 12:00 PM
Great refrain and so true.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 3:55 PM
Thank you Kim ❤️
Bauer Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 11:22 AM
You have really risen to the challenge, Alison! A very deep and moving poem in a form I have never attempted. Bravo!
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 3:54 PM
Thank you Irene .. the making of the shape is through a program John Anderson has created. See William the Concreter blog.❤️
Parker Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 8:00 AM
a very emotional poem Ailson, one that is relatable to those who were born with a hole in their soul that can never be filled, only watered by the drizzle that falls once in a while...
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 3:52 PM
Thank you Frederic for your feedback.
Sharma  Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 6:13 AM
Sigh! This is such a soul-stirring and heart-wrenching piece dear Alison.. your words really left me speechless.. the simultaneous droughts and floods, sweeping us off with fatal emotions! I felt everything too deeply here.. the way you've written "You do not need a riverbed to drown" i really felt the weight of it.. the loneliness and the ache that eats us from inside .. very melancholic this is.. so beautifully written. Pantoum is a very intriguing form, I've never tried one before but would love to someday! You've executed this so well! Sending you light and love always, huggssszzz 🧜‍♀️🌹💫✨
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 6:22 AM
Thank you fot your visit. This form helps when you want an idea to continue down the poem. Grabbing new meaning each time.❤️
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