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A Drop of Rain

A drop of rain each soul is, Born out of the vapors of the spiritual ocean, Filled with divine wisdom and Destined To execute the celestial will Of Watering materiality’s arid planes of ignorance Before Its glorious eternal source to rejoin! © Demetrios Trifiatis 25 FEBRUARY 2014

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/26/2015 1:05:00 PM

Baptism :) of water, love this beautiful verse with lots of wisdom. Blessings dear friend Eve

Kim Van Breda

Date: 3/5/2014 12:35:00 PM

YES!! This is beautiful. A descriptive and elaboration of our existence, ".A drop of rain each soul is" indeed. I wrote... "The last drop of Water" along similar lines. xx Xx~Xx

Paul Callus

Date: 3/5/2014 11:42:00 AM

Demetrios, this is beautiful; I especially like that 2nd verse. // paul

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/5/2014 7:09:00 AM

Spirit and water is what We are made from..Indeed..who We are.The rain reminds me of purity and to that pure spiritual source We will return.An inspiring and beautiful poem indeed-Charma

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/5/2014 8:52:00 AM

Thank you my dear Charma, for the inspiring comment!

James Kelley

Date: 3/5/2014 3:35:00 AM

Oh, yes...this provokes so much thought. Excellent.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/5/2014 8:53:00 AM

Truly appreciated your comment is, dear James!

Therese Bacha

Date: 2/28/2014 7:11:00 PM

Hi Dimitrios, I am not yet back at poetry soup, just passed to say hi, and haven't heard from you in a while, if you doing good. I am in San Francisco with my younger son, staying for a few more months. Take care. God bless. Terry xoxo

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/4/2014 5:15:00 AM

Hi Therese! I have written to you! My e-mail has changed. If you delete emetrios and the line and keep only the d together with the rest you have my new e-mail. Sorry, I was hacked and lost all e-mails!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 2/26/2014 4:36:00 PM

I never thought of my soul being that. I like it.Thanks... Lucilla

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/4/2014 5:15:00 AM

So happy to see you feel better! Thank you for your lovely comment and visit!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/26/2014 7:27:00 AM

so well captured Demetrios from water we come to water we return wonderful pen hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/26/2014 7:34:00 AM

Thank you my dear Shadow! Yes, from water we come to water we return BUT with some spirituality within! I appreciate your visit and comment!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/25/2014 4:46:00 AM

- Really beautiful, Demetrios !! - Have a nice day my friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/25/2014 7:07:00 AM

What a lovely visit! Thank you so much dear Anne Lise!

Tiaua M Ioane

Date: 2/25/2014 4:01:00 AM

So simple but such depth: 'watering..planes of ignorance'-wow! great write thanks. TMI

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/25/2014 7:08:00 AM

Dear Tiaua, welcome! Thank you for your kind visit and your so gracious comment!

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/25/2014 3:40:00 AM

Isn't it amazing how we as souls have come to be and how we do return to where we were created! I certainly loved each and every line of this glorious write here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this wondrous poem this evening! What an outstanding piece, such a terrific poem! Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/25/2014 7:09:00 AM

AS always my friend you are so kind and generous with your superb analysis and comment! Thank you Russell!