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A Drop of Rain - a Grain of Sand

I’m no more than a drop of rain Landing in the sea I offer you my Lord all I am I belong to thee My path has been a winding road Often I feel lost Wondering how this drop of rain Will ever pay the cost I reckon I shall find a wave Ride it to the shore Then soak into a grain of sand And live forever more Whether I’m a drop of rain Or a grain of sand I shall always strive to be The very best I can

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Deborah Herber

Date: 10/6/2008 4:37:00 AM

I think this is probably my favorite so far, it says so much in such a short span of words. Your talent continues to amaze me!

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 9/16/2008 6:16:00 PM

Oh Michael, I love this! The surrender, the journey..a message softly spoken, but it echoes mightily in my heart! Thank you! Trudy

James Foulk

Date: 9/7/2008 9:06:00 PM

Loved this poem, love the detail of it, and you did a beautiful job of penning it.

Date: 9/5/2008 4:22:00 PM

This is such a creative way to share an uplifting message. Love the last stanza. In that thought there is always hope. Blessings to you for sharing your thoughts and talent with us. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/5/2008 7:15:00 AM

Good Morning, Michael, This poem is one we should print, keep close by to read each morning before we start our day. What a wonderful daily reminder to do our best, and with God's help, we can overcome most anything that comes our way. Blessings.....Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/5/2008 6:48:00 AM

You are such an admirable man. I tell you Michael, you are shining. With love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 9/5/2008 6:32:00 AM

...yes. You go, man! Do your best, be your best, and you simply cannot go wrong. Excellent. Love Kristin