A Drizzle of Memories

Sometimes when my mind is restless and stressed, 
From the humdrum of the daily grind, 
I feel refreshed and chilled
By a cool drizzle following a soft breeze:
A drizzle of memories from the childhood, 
Soothing and calming my worn out mind
Those joyful flashes of the past I treasure.

I cherish those summer evening walks to beach
With my sister, friends and her friends much elder, 
As my childhood home was just a walking distance
To the vast blue Bay of Bengal;
With stiff balmy sea breeze tousling our hair, 
We used to walk barefoot along the shore, 
Feeling the water over our feet and the sand
And admire and wonder at the crabs
Making their homes in wet sand, so agile!;
The fun and laughter while building sandcastles
And collecting the variety of beautiful sea shells-
I still remember one such occasions
When it started drizzling suddenly:
A soft, gentle, short summer rain, 
And dancing in the drizzle became all the more fun. 

Back home and after a bath, I remember
Devouring those delicious hot medu vadas, 
That mom used to make for us
With her special coconut chutney;
I cherish the taste of those vadas and hot tea
That still lingers in my mouth... 

Those were moments the very thought of which, 
Makes me feel like dancing in joy:
For they were bounded with love, laughter and fun, 
And my heart beats gently to those rhythms -
Sweet familiar rhythms of the drizzle of memories
A drizzle of memories of joy I cherish
That forever I hold dear!


Date: 04/04/2021
Submitted for: Writing Prompt - Cherish - Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France


Note:
1. Medu Vada: Medu vada is a crispy fluffy South Indian snack. 
2. Coconut chutney: Coconut chutney is a side dish accompanying a variety of Indian snacks and breakfast items.

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Date: 4/16/2021 7:13:00 AM
Medu Vada makes my mouth water my dear friend and isn't always the case that we will always have memories of our mothers cooking - your poem is such tremendous fun and speaks of carefree beach walks and dancing in the drizzle on the beach with your sister, how beautiful and loving a fav. for me. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/12/2021 2:14:00 PM
I hope I ever congratulated you for your win with this one, and can't wait to see new poetry from you even though I know how busy you have been. Thanks for being such a sweet friend!
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Date: 4/9/2021 7:37:00 AM
Ani, congratulations on your win with my writing prompt Cherish and creating this beautiful poem, I have wonderful memories of childhood also that I cherish, well done, love _Constance
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 4/9/2021 10:03:00 AM
Constance thank you so much for such a lovely contest... I wish to read your poems in which you cherish your memories.. once I get time dear... Hugs.. ~ Ani
Date: 4/9/2021 1:11:00 AM
Very nice Anitha....reading this it filled my heart and stomach...much love and congrats on your first place win :)
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Date: 4/9/2021 3:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Carol... that's nice to hear... Will be reading your poem too.. soon.. dear... God bless.. ~ Ani
Date: 4/8/2021 5:54:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... expressed in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
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Date: 4/9/2021 3:12:00 AM
Thank you so much Beata..for the visit and comment. Will be reading your poem too.. soon... Hugs.. ~ Ani
Date: 4/8/2021 3:29:00 PM
Ani a very nice poem! I can understand your love for Medhu vada and Tengai chutney and all the other memories you have written about! Congrats on your top win!!
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Date: 4/9/2021 3:11:00 AM
Haha... Krishji... Nothing can beat the taste of medhu vada and thengai chutney... specially made by mom.. (for anyone). I too make it here, but whether it's tasty or not you should ask my son... Lol... Thank you for your visit and comment. Will be reading your poem soon... God bless.. ~ Ani
Date: 4/8/2021 3:23:00 PM
Great write, Anitha, you made me feel the moments with you. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/9/2021 3:08:00 AM
Thank you SO much dear Eve for your lovely comment. Big hugs...Will be reading your poem soon. ~ Ani
Date: 4/8/2021 2:28:00 PM
Dear Anitha, your memory brought back one of my memories too. I was seven years old when I visited Aleppi where my uncle used to work. We used to play in the beach every evening, and got drenched by running after and playing with the waves. It was a lot of fun, and one of the best childhood memories. Congratulations on your awesome win. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 4/9/2021 3:06:00 AM
Dear Mala, am so happy to hear from you and read your memories. So you are a Bengali with your relatives in South India... That's great... My native (where I was born)... is Kerala, and the place where I was brought up is Chennai.. (Tamil Nadu). Will sure soupmail you once I reach my native... waiting to read your amazing poem too... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 4/8/2021 12:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" story/write. I love your line, "A drizzle of memories of joy I cherish." Great memories are the best. Have a blessed day....................
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Date: 4/9/2021 3:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Paula.. Will be reading your wonderful poem too.... soon... Have a blessed day... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 4/8/2021 9:02:00 AM
Hi Anita, What a beautiful write on the things you cherish. Thanks for sharing them with us. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/9/2021 3:01:00 AM
Alexis thank you so much...Sunday am travelling to my native... So, am SO busy dear... Will be visiting and reading your poem once I reach there and get settled a bit... You too have a sweet day... Hugs.. ~ Ani
Date: 4/8/2021 7:47:00 AM
Beautifully written Anitha!! Well deserved win!! Congratulations!!! Big huggs. Deb
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Date: 4/9/2021 2:58:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Deborah...Will visit your poem too.... Big hugs to you too... ~ Ani
Date: 4/7/2021 3:25:00 PM
Hey, just came here to tell you, new P pleiades contest. Pick a word and GO!
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Date: 4/9/2021 2:56:00 AM
I know my dear sweet friend.. and thank you so much for letting me know... But no time or mood now... you know the reason... Hugs.. ~ Ani
Date: 4/7/2021 10:06:00 AM
Such precious drizzles of memories of the childhood days Anitha! And those medu vadas with homemade coconut chutney!!! yum!!
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Date: 4/9/2021 2:55:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Smitha... Are you a South Indian?. Will talk to you soon dear... Hugs.. ~ Ani
Date: 4/7/2021 12:41:00 AM
Lovely memories.
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Date: 4/9/2021 2:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor.. ~ Ani
Date: 4/6/2021 7:35:00 PM
There is a bubbly sense of joy to this piece with lots of details for the mind’s eye to picture. I like the sound of the word drizzle and how you’ve pinned it to memories .... a drizzle of rain or maybe even a sweet drizzle to accompany those snacks of yours. Thanks for your visit to my page by the way.
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Date: 4/9/2021 2:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Timothy for the visit and comment. Much appreciate.. God bless.. ~ Ani
Date: 4/5/2021 5:08:00 PM
I so agree with you, sweetie. being with family, doing a special thing and including food. Those three make the best of our cherished moments.
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Date: 4/9/2021 2:52:00 AM
Yes true Andrea... Thank you so much... Hugs.. ~ Ani
Date: 4/4/2021 9:05:00 PM
A wonderful insight Anitha, to your memories, The poetry so beautiful.
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Date: 4/5/2021 9:46:00 AM
Thank you so much Harry. Have a great day ~ Ani
Date: 4/4/2021 11:59:00 AM
Lovely pen Anitha, with good imagery and fine expression. Take care, Gordon
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Date: 4/5/2021 9:46:00 AM
Thank you so much Gordon. God bless. ~ Ani
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