A Dream Within

To dream a dream within a dream: a bit uncommon, it would seem. Occasions when this happens: rare. But be assured, yes, be aware, for 'tis a disconcerting thing to, from a state unconscious, bring oneself to find you're still asleep, nor can you move or make a peep. For when in terror's deepest throes, you blissfully escape your woes, and think you're back from dark to light, remember, "Wait, it should be night!", well, that is when true fear sets in; you thrash and scream and scream again. I've never gone as deep as three; no thanks, two's plenty much for me! ---------- Second Place Winner for the Form L - Lay - New Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France on the theme of 3. Dream written on 03/31/2022
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La France Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 1:32 PM
Jeff, congratulations on your win in my Lay Contest with your wonderful poem ~Constance
Kendrick Avatar
April 7, 2022 at 4:40 PM
Congrats on this one being on Constance's winners' list. Way to go. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 9:48 AM
Wow! I’ve had a dream within a dream nightmare! You think you’re awake but your not! Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 2:56 PM
lol…I didn’t like inception…bus keeps falling…how much time did that take up…just say’n
Kyser Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 10:00 AM
they're pretty disorienting, aren't they? Guess that's why Inception was a hit...
Miller Avatar
April 1, 2022 at 7:00 AM
A three-dream night no thanks, great poem Jeff.
Wolf Avatar
March 31, 2022 at 5:55 PM
Enjoyed your muse on a dream within a dream, Jeff. ~ N. Sconced
Kyser Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 10:01 AM
thanks Gershon - ensconced... that's "possessed of plenty of sweet biscuits", right?
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 31, 2022 at 11:35 AM
Hello Jeff Kyser, I have had 2 dreams in one. The first one wa I am Ballroom dancing with someone the face is a blur. The second one is a dream of dancing with the Nutcracker on stage. Both felt very real. enjoy your day my friend.
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April 6, 2022 at 2:57 PM
How fun, Darlene! ~ Kim
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