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For Sotto Poet's  'Dream Destination' Poetry Contest

A Dream Destination

I don’t really need a dream vacation,
but if I had to choose a destination,
it would be a tranquil place like Antigua beach
(even though for me that's a little out of reach). 

Nearby me there would be coconut palm trees,
and I would feel a warm, soft tropical breeze
coming from the stunning Caribbean Sea.
In a place like Half Moon Bay I might be.

I’d lounge on a chair set upon white sand.
Sometimes there would be a cocktail in my hand.
I’d take in nature’s beauty and read beneath the sun,
and later jump some waves or scuba dive for fun.

“Been there, done that” is my mood these days
now that I’ve arrived at my autumn-years phase.
Having sown my “adventure oats” when in my youth,
I’m happy simply being home, and that’s the truth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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May Avatar
March 15, 2026 at 6:09 AM
A soothing tropical breeze as you enjoy the waves sounds relaxing
Williams Avatar
January 6, 2026 at 2:51 PM
Congratulations on your win in this contest, Andrea! I appreciate your fun, creative, and honest piece. (I have been to Antigua, and it is lovely - much like how you have described it. That said, there truly is no place like home!) Nice to see you in the winners' circle - again! Very best, Bartholomew
Guptar Avatar
January 5, 2026 at 8:45 AM
Congratulations, dear poetess, on your win in this contest with a lovely realistic poem on your dream destination. 'caelus non mare trans mutat", .. "Changing the sky does not change the spirit,",-which I learnt in my grade seven school days.
Jones Avatar
January 4, 2026 at 1:41 PM
Back to say congratulations and thanks for letting me know the results!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 4:33 PM
I agree with you....now I'm simply fine being at home....most travels occur within my mind :-)
Dietrich Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 6:49 PM
For reals
Godwin Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 2:01 AM
Before I grew to be premium, I was already centering beautifully. I was going to beg you to take me with you then you let out your home truth and popped my balloon! I think we should go, such a climate might kill all that ails us, and salt water heals many things, too. So, I'm going to Antigua Beach, a place my imagination can easily reach, but first I must finish with Italy and all of its history. LOVE
Rodgers Avatar
December 23, 2025 at 11:49 AM
Dear Andrea, I loved how you painted Antigua and Half Moon Bay with such ease: coconut palms, soft breezes, white sand, and the gentle rhythm of waves. I am ready to head to the Islands! Merry Chrismas and Holiday Blessings, Dear Andrea, Daniel
Dietrich Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 12:27 AM
Thanks, Daniel
Kauffman Avatar
December 23, 2025 at 11:26 AM
A great dream destination, Andrea! Wonderfully penned. But I have to say I'm with you on your "stay-cation!" Merry Christmas, my friend! Sending you blessings and a cup of cheer!
Goldsmith Avatar
December 23, 2025 at 9:56 AM
Your Antigua is a great dream destination. I would love to go there. Coconut palm trees and a soft tropical breeze with white sand beaches, all sound heavenly. "Good Luck" I did "Tahiti." Have a Very Blessed Christmas and New Year 2026.............
Dietrich Avatar
December 23, 2025 at 11:03 AM
I have been to only a few beaches but I really love them. The best Caycay of all is a cruise!
Jones Avatar
December 23, 2025 at 6:53 AM
Here here! I identify with this Andrea! Love the rhyme and message. Hope you have a Merry Christmas! Soupmail
Dietrich Avatar
December 23, 2025 at 11:02 AM
Thanks, Karen
Kendrick Avatar
December 23, 2025 at 3:24 AM
It seems that travel gets less interesting as we get older. It seems home and family are our top priority. I like this one. Seems like there might be a contest going on, if so, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thank you for sharing. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
December 23, 2025 at 11:02 AM
For sure!
Kerr Avatar
December 22, 2025 at 10:56 PM
Andrea, You have composed a practical, no nonsense yet very lyrical entry for the contest concerned. Good luck with this. Thanks for your recent comments, Howard
Hind Avatar
December 22, 2025 at 9:31 PM
I wish I could travel. Nice poem, Andrea!!
Theraven Avatar
December 22, 2025 at 8:21 PM
Hello Andrea, Very nice destination, even if just in dreams. But it's always nice coming home. -Richard
Dietrich Avatar
December 22, 2025 at 9:01 PM
For sure
Hawley Avatar
December 22, 2025 at 7:34 PM
I am nowhere near a place in my life where sitting home is just fine with me, maybe in 35 years I will feel that way. I do like the idea of going where there is white sand and palm trees. Great poem by the way.
Dietrich Avatar
December 22, 2025 at 8:46 PM
Prolia messed me up so bad that I can't even imagine taking trips again. I even turned down my sister's offer of a free cruise to me. Life is a struggle. I mostly lay around so I don't feel the sensations of my nerves gone crazy down my back. I am just thankful I got to see a lot of the world in my youth.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 22, 2025 at 3:34 PM
I flew through the canopy of Antigua! That zip line was my first. I cried, but I finished all lines, with help. So beautiful there! Fave!
Dietrich Avatar
December 22, 2025 at 4:26 PM
Wow thanks. To tell you the truth, I was never there but I researched best islands and found out about Antigua. It's so cool you got to go there. I would love to do zip lining.
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