A Dream

Perhaps she dreams of love to come
A pose of beauty unsurpassed
Here in the shadows silent calm
White hands rest so gently clasped.

A pose of beauty unsurpassed
Her flowing hair conceals an envied sleep
White hands rest so gently clasped
Dreams confined are hers to keep

Her flowing hair conceals an envied sleep
Here in the shadows silent calm
Dreams confined are hers to keep
Perhaps she dreams of love to come


For Isaiah Zerbst - A Dream Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/1/2014 12:21:00 PM
Well done on this form and congrats on your placing. Peace. :)
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Date: 5/30/2014 11:48:00 PM
Suzanne, congratulations, Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/29/2014 4:48:00 PM
Hi Suz, and enjoyable win... I enjoyed the painting Isaiah, had for this contest...Linda
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Date: 5/27/2014 10:19:00 PM
This is a beautiful write and a lovely take on the painting. Very nicely done, Suzanne! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/27/2014 6:44:00 AM
SuZ, congratulations on your great win! Beautiful take on the painting! I love it!
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Date: 5/27/2014 5:57:00 AM
Beautiful poem SuZ...I like the form you chose...Congrats on a great win
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Date: 5/26/2014 6:25:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved win, Suzanne.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/26/2014 10:10:00 PM
Thankyou Faye: What a nice surprise and I will checkout the other winners soon. Love<*_*> Suz
Date: 5/26/2014 2:34:00 PM
Lovely use of form! congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/26/2014 10:12:00 PM
Thanks Debbie: I had never written a Panthoum until I came to poetry soup. Now I have tried it twice I am sold on it. Thanks for taking time to encourage me. Love<*_*> Suz
Date: 5/26/2014 2:30:00 PM
Hi Suzanne, you made great use of the pantoum form in your beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 5/26/2014 10:13:00 PM
Thankyou Carolyn: Always wonderrful to see you here. Love<*_*> Suz
Date: 5/26/2014 10:22:00 AM
Suzanne, this is terrific.. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/26/2014 10:13:00 PM
Dave: Always a pleasure to have you visit. Thanks for kind words. Love<*_*> Suz
Date: 5/26/2014 8:09:00 AM
A great use of the form...congrats on a BIG win. BG
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Date: 5/26/2014 10:15:00 PM
Hi Barbara: I am really thrilled. At first I didn't think I could write anything but the Pantoum form really fit this style of painting. Lucky coincidence. Love<*_*> Suz
Date: 5/18/2014 6:26:00 AM
I think you have written a winner here. I love the way you imagine her dreams, yet say "her hands gently clasp them and confine the dreams" They are hers and we can only wonder.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/26/2014 10:16:00 PM
Thanks Monteray: Your prediction came true. You gave me luck. Love<*_*> Suz
Date: 5/18/2014 12:42:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem.
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Date: 5/26/2014 10:17:00 PM
Thankyou for reading, Love<*_*> Suz