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A Dream

Perhaps she dreams of love to come A pose of beauty unsurpassed Here in the shadows silent calm White hands rest so gently clasped. A pose of beauty unsurpassed Her flowing hair conceals an envied sleep White hands rest so gently clasped Dreams confined are hers to keep Her flowing hair conceals an envied sleep Here in the shadows silent calm Dreams confined are hers to keep Perhaps she dreams of love to come For Isaiah Zerbst - A Dream Contest

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Robert Johnson

Date: 6/1/2014 12:21:00 PM

Well done on this form and congrats on your placing. Peace. :)

Skat A

Date: 5/30/2014 11:48:00 PM

Suzanne, congratulations, Love ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/29/2014 4:48:00 PM

Hi Suz, and enjoyable win... I enjoyed the painting Isaiah, had for this contest...Linda

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/27/2014 10:19:00 PM

This is a beautiful write and a lovely take on the painting. Very nicely done, Suzanne! Congratulations on your win!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/27/2014 6:44:00 AM

SuZ, congratulations on your great win! Beautiful take on the painting! I love it!

Joseph May

Date: 5/27/2014 5:57:00 AM

Beautiful poem SuZ...I like the form you chose...Congrats on a great win

Faye Gibson

Date: 5/26/2014 6:25:00 PM

Congratulations on a well deserved win, Suzanne.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/26/2014 10:10:00 PM

Thankyou Faye: What a nice surprise and I will checkout the other winners soon. Love<*_*> Suz

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/26/2014 2:34:00 PM

Lovely use of form! congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/26/2014 10:12:00 PM

Thanks Debbie: I had never written a Panthoum until I came to poetry soup. Now I have tried it twice I am sold on it. Thanks for taking time to encourage me. Love<*_*> Suz

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/26/2014 2:30:00 PM

Hi Suzanne, you made great use of the pantoum form in your beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/26/2014 10:13:00 PM

Thankyou Carolyn: Always wonderrful to see you here. Love<*_*> Suz

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/26/2014 8:09:00 AM

A great use of the form...congrats on a BIG win. BG

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/26/2014 10:15:00 PM

Hi Barbara: I am really thrilled. At first I didn't think I could write anything but the Pantoum form really fit this style of painting. Lucky coincidence. Love<*_*> Suz

Monterey Sirak

Date: 5/18/2014 6:26:00 AM

I think you have written a winner here. I love the way you imagine her dreams, yet say "her hands gently clasp them and confine the dreams" They are hers and we can only wonder.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/26/2014 10:16:00 PM

Thanks Monteray: Your prediction came true. You gave me luck. Love<*_*> Suz

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 5/18/2014 12:42:00 AM

Enjoyed the poem.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/26/2014 10:17:00 PM

Thankyou for reading, Love<*_*> Suz