A Dream

A Dream of Loving YOU ~ Dreamt I Making Love to YOU was “ Ecstasy “ YOUR Soft ; Smooth Skin enticing me YOUR Forrest Eyes ~ beckoning my LOVE I whisper ; How much I Love “ Y O U “ As I enter the warmth of Your Love Together , entwined - in Passion FOREVER : My Love ~ “ BARBARA JEAN “ Inspired By the Mini Blog Contest “Crystalline Images” Sponsored by “ Constance ~ A Rambling Poet ~ “ Dedicated to My LOVE ~ “BARBARA JEAN GORELICK” ~

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Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 10/15/2010 12:54:00 PM

Who's Barbara? nice one...she should feel proud of you ;)

James Peranteau

Date: 10/8/2010 2:27:00 PM

Ya ever been zapped by an outlet ? This was kinda like it ! Great write ! She's got ta be a winner ! james

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/2/2010 8:02:00 PM

Thank you HG..you can write a love poem like no one I know. BG

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/2/2010 5:59:00 AM

Very passionate write..I am sure that Barbara is floored with such passion..Sara

Lynette Chachere

Date: 9/28/2010 5:23:00 PM

filled with so much passion & soft whispers. sending prayers to you & your love. ~Always&Forever you sister spirit, Lynn

Constance La France

Date: 9/28/2010 7:14:00 AM

Harry, full of love, you asked why I chose Crystalline for my mini blog contest, well, for these types of contest, I think it is best not to request a long poem, even asking for 2 lines was difficult only received 6 entries.. thank for the comment on my poem, Engraved in Stone, well that poem was originally written in honour Brian Strand, a poet on this site who always inspired me and then I entered in a contest and it placed..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/27/2010 1:52:00 PM

Nice pairss of Cristalline worded well, Daniel

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/27/2010 11:49:00 AM

Barbara will love this poem, HG. I sent her an email asking her to read it! A wonderful series of crystallines and I wish you luck in Constance's mini blog contest! Hope you are doing well, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Skat A

Date: 9/27/2010 9:04:00 AM

WOW, DEEP AND LOVELY WRITE, A WONDERFUL POEM TO READ! HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT