A Dream

A Dream of Loving YOU ~ Dreamt  I
Making Love to YOU was “ Ecstasy  “

YOUR Soft ; Smooth Skin enticing me
YOUR Forrest Eyes ~ beckoning my LOVE

I whisper ;  How much I Love  “ Y O U “
As I enter the warmth of Your Love

Together , entwined - in Passion
FOREVER : My Love ~ “ BARBARA JEAN “

Inspired By the Mini Blog Contest “Crystalline Images” 
   Sponsored by  “ Constance ~ A Rambling Poet ~ “
Dedicated to  My LOVE ~ “BARBARA JEAN GORELICK” ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Ahmad Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 12:54 PM
Who's Barbara? nice one...she should feel proud of you ;)
Peranteau Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 2:27 PM
Ya ever been zapped by an outlet ? This was kinda like it ! Great write ! She's got ta be a winner ! james
Gorelick Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 8:02 PM
Thank you HG..you can write a love poem like no one I know. BG
Kendrick Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 5:59 AM
Very passionate write..I am sure that Barbara is floored with such passion..Sara
Chachere Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 5:23 PM
filled with so much passion & soft whispers. sending prayers to you & your love. ~Always&Forever you sister spirit, Lynn
La France Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 7:14 AM
Harry, full of love, you asked why I chose Crystalline for my mini blog contest, well, for these types of contest, I think it is best not to request a long poem, even asking for 2 lines was difficult only received 6 entries.. thank for the comment on my poem, Engraved in Stone, well that poem was originally written in honour Brian Strand, a poet on this site who always inspired me and then I entered in a contest and it placed..
Mehta Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 1:52 PM
Nice pairss of Cristalline worded well, Daniel
Devonshire Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 11:49 AM
Barbara will love this poem, HG. I sent her an email asking her to read it! A wonderful series of crystallines and I wish you luck in Constance's mini blog contest! Hope you are doing well, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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September 27, 2010 at 9:04 AM
WOW, DEEP AND LOVELY WRITE, A WONDERFUL POEM TO READ! HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT
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